Very detailed story that opens up with a very tense (and heart wrenching scene). I appreciate the level of detail provided, and although I would suggest more dialog intermingled throughout the narrative to speed up the pacing, it didn’t take away from the story at all. Overall, I loved this, it’s in my library and I will stay tuned for more updates!
AMonarch
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