This is my first ever story on Webnovel. I'd really appreciate if I got some reviews so I can have feedback. I aim to make this story more enjoyable for you after all.
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great start, and I like the mc. something I noticed is one of your scenes, the one in the alley is in another fic and he pretty much used the same mo to be padmes guard. I am guessing he copied you since he used a character name from another story here for the mc. hope you start back up.