Logain_Septimus
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Good so far. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
My only complaint is the lack of thought of other stats. 40 stat investment alone makes you superhuman. At 99 strength he'd struggle to not crush standard weapons in his grip. Had he invested in other stats some that'd make more sense... Just an observation. But I understand the goal was to gain 'soul strength' and all that.
MC feels awkward and annoying. Some of the characters are roughly the same. Interactions feel unnatural. The writing needs work but it's ok. The story background is a 'great' idea but so far 20 chaps in feels off. I personally don't like this. But someone else will.
As far as dxd goes it's kind of mid. Worth a read but some of the grammatical mistakes stick out and mess with my flow. Other than that well written. The MC is kind of annoying but other than that it's fine.
So far it's really well thought out and the decisions made do make sense to their ends. The MC has a fairly human outlook and makes sense in his own rites and rituals. His design is also epic sounding. The world state hasn't changed too much so far we still have the side arcs to go into and a lot of the subplot is yet to be touched.
The grammar is good, the background story is good, the characters so far are good. There's some clear bias in the story but we're human after all. I have no real complaints aside from there not being more here to read. Keep it up. For the long part: there's not enough story to do an in depth review but over all I like the progress and the MCs reactions aren't over the top but fit in with the narrative of his time and placement in the story. That's all for now.