AuthorShizuka
This novel has the stereotypical Cold CEO and innocent girl plot but I was very impressed by the author's take on the plot. The plot was interesting and very unique. However, there were quite a few errors in grammar, capitalization and punctuations. The author continuously switched from the present tense to the past tense and vice versa and the writing style lacked consistency. Also, most of the sentences started with common letters and didn't even have any end marks. All of these errors, affected the comprehensibility of the novel. Overall, the novel has potential but the errors truly plagued the chapters. The synopsis was also extremely long lol, it was almost as long as the chapters. I couldn't read all of it so for me it's length was a big turn off. This was my honest review, I hope you can only improve as you continue to write. [img=recommend]
In a sense I understand why this novel garners a lot of attention from the fans. The CEO is the usual fantasy of teenage girl (I KNOW BECAUSE I WAS A TEENAGER ONCE!!!) LOL. It makes young women, or most adults relive their romantic fantasy. A ruthless CEO and an angelic female. If you want to relive your teenage fantasy, then this is one of the books that will make you feel that. KUDDOS to the author.
I must say, I was very surprised with the writing style in the prologue cause I thought the story was gonna be written like that throughout the chapters. Overall though, this is quite an interesting story. I do however feel bad for what Abigail has to go through and I hope she'll stay strong till the end and that Aaron will end up being a good person later 😂