Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in KISS ME NOT MY PRINCESS

This novel has the stereotypical Cold CEO and innocent girl plot but I was very impressed by the author's take on the plot. The plot was interesting and very unique. However, there were quite a few errors in grammar, capitalization and punctuations. The author continuously switched from the present tense to the past tense and vice versa and the writing style lacked consistency. Also, most of the sentences started with common letters and didn't even have any end marks. All of these errors, affected the comprehensibility of the novel. Overall, the novel has potential but the errors truly plagued the chapters. The synopsis was also extremely long lol, it was almost as long as the chapters. I couldn't read all of it so for me it's length was a big turn off. This was my honest review, I hope you can only improve as you continue to write. [img=recommend]