Reviews of Becoming The Admin Of A Dimensional Chuunibyo Chat Group Isn't Easy!
Becoming The Admin Of A Dimensional Chuunibyo Chat Group Isn't Easy!
JadePanda003
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- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
A shameless author giving a five star review to his own work here! Don't look at me. It's natural that I'd support myself. Now, onto the juicy stuffs. If you guys are curious as to which anime worlds Shun will be going to, ask no further! Just go to the introduction, one of my Auxiliary Chapters, and read the spoilers there! I pretty much wrote whatever I wanted to say to all first time readers of my fanfiction in my Introduction so… yeah. Go ahead and check it out!
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I love the story so far, it’s too short to go fully in depth at this time but the main characters interactions with the others is fun to read plus I just love novels or fanfics that take place in games while this one takes place in two as of now. I am overjoyed to see Only Sense Online getting some love as I never see it anywhere yet it’s so good. Can’t wait to see how the interactions with the original Bofuri cast will happen, and I really want to see the mc reach maple levels of OP. Pochi and Tama were wonderful touches to the story it’s as if they’re the little mascots of the chat group and you just gotta love seeing their shenanigans. The upload schedule leaves nothing to be desired it’s quick enough to mantain my interest in the story. Hope you keep this up author it’s loads of fun, I was half tempted to write something mean just to F with you but meh.
I normally read 10-15 chapters before writing a review,but made an exception on this after reading on three chapters. my verdict is that this is an abysmal read. the main reasons are the MC personality!! he's "special needs" intelligence just put me off on reading further. also the side characters etc sister,step sister are an eyesore. I would like to credit the author for the writing,its not everyone's cup of tea.it takes time and effort to write a story down.
To celebrate getting 1k collections, I'm here to give myself another review. It's more like a self-reflection of sorts. Writing Quality- Now, looking back, I definitely could have done better in some cases like how the conversations inside the group chat progressed. Some chapters like that made me felt satisfied by what I wrote while reading while others made me frown in annoyance. My grammar should at least be readable while but it's a far cry from those excellently written novels. Story Development- The story is still in its beginning stages so nothing really exciting or dramatic happened. The story's pacing is quite good in my opinion, with no major time skips except for when I skipped the childhood phase. The story's now its first Dimension Travel so there's that as well. Character Design- Nothing could be said here, I think. I took characters from different novels and tried to emulate their unique personalities as much as I can. Updating Stability- It's being updated everyday for almost a month now so it's a five star! Haha. World Background- In terms of this one, I think I never really delved too deep into it as I felt that there wasn't really a need to. It's a much more advanced Earth than ours, what more should I say? However, I might further elaborate when it comes to some cases like in another world. All in all, I'm pretty satisfied with how this story is shaping out to be. No stressful events, not much in terms of drama, just a fluffy Slice of Life story that is paired with Game Elements and Dimensional Travelling experience. To those who wants to read this thinking that there will be serious developments, I'd suggest that you should turn around and look for something else. I didn't start this book to stress myself and the readers by making us all go through a roller coaster of emotions. I made this because I want to relax and take my mind away from the stress of work, even for a moment.
Currently up to chapter 91, and honestly these past 20 chapters or so have been unbelievably boring. Nothing major has been happening, nor anything all that interesting; it has mostly just been a continued line of Isekai tropes. It has really been killing my desire to read it all that much, I've only been able to squish in 4 chapters max per day simply because it has been so uninteresting. I don't yet know about anything last this chapter, but the earlier chapters have been extremely interesting and fun to read. The MC went by a pretty interesting build to read about and the storyline has been progressing extremely well. However, my point still stands, the chapters from around the late 70s to (up to what I know) Chapter 91. It could be even longer but all these chapters have just been so boring boring me.
- Generally the story is good, but MC feel a bit perfect (Mary Stu), master chief + got a good physique + good with weapons + intelligent + never got in problems + doesn't actually show any teenager like reactions considering that most of his friends are females 'no reaction what so ever just poor attempt to describe it' ; also his interaction with group member is too little, especially Rikka & Satanachia cuz he's either with Tama & Pochi or alone. - never saw all of them team up together, or having Shun tag along with them, its like he's avoiding everyone from his sisters & chag group members. - this affected my rating a lot, but I couldn't bear to give you any less, group chat members are meant to interact with. not to be avoided, otherwise why forming such group?
Writing another review cause now it has enough chapters to know how many stars should be given. ************ Writing quality: Perfect. No major grammar or spelling mistakes. Story development: Story starts up good. You gets to know his background and his past easily and along with summary of what had happened. But the chat group appears too suddenly but it can be say that it appears at the start of the canon(probably). Then the further chapters are developed pretty good. The author had added some AU but it's ok, it doesn't affect the character behaviour... *Sign* it's pretty hard to give review without spoilers... Character designs: Character designs is simple and on to the point. The author is able to potrait the characters according to their original behaviour, which is pretty hard even to professional authors... Updating stability: Best. You gets chapters daily, which is best. Author you have my respect to write the chapters so fast and accurate. World background: Here's the problem. The author had took a great risk and even won the prize. Background is based on a novel which might not be read by most of the readers but this also creates suspence. Usually chat ff have characters from famous animes like dxd, Fate/, or Yosuga No Sora(used frequently). But author had took risk making the background completely of different novel that might not be read by many readers. This is pretty astonishing... ________________________ Now what are you waiting for? Go and read the ff immediately.
great story. only disappointment is that there is megumin on the front page but not in the book currently. except that good one. funny and serious a the same time and autor did made his research about the world he is going. most of all for once MC doesn't know anything about his new world so no advantage of knpwing the story in advance.
If you're looking for some information about this book before diving in and reading it, then look no further! The Writing Quality of this fanfiction is not something too glamorous or technical. If you looking for that kind of novel/fanfiction (a fanfiction that was written in a very professional manner), then you're better off looking for something else because this is just not it. This is also slow paced and DOES NOT have action in each and every chapter. This is not an Action novel but a Slice of Life one with bits and pieces of unprofessionally written action and/or comedy if you could call it that. Maybe skits or an attempt to be funny would be a better term. Story Development is nothing special. Again, this is a Wish Fulfillment fanfiction and the author clearly do not aspire to write some phenomenal fanfiction that would blow everyone's mind. As he said multiple times already, "What I want is to write something that I could relax my mind in while doing so and not some overly dramatic sh*tstorm. That's not my style and never will be. Dramatic sh*ts are already plaguing everyone's life right now so I, for one, don't enjoy writing about sob stories"(Basically my interpretation of his replies to the comments. Don't take my word for it though). Maybe, after reading bits and pieces of the novel, you'll go like, "Oh, that's something that's already in the original! Can't you write something more ORIGINAL, Author!?" Well, in my humble opinion, you should go look at which section you are right now. What type of book is this? A fanfiction. What style did the author say he wanted it to be in the introduction? A Wish Fulfillment and/or Self Insert(something along those lines). So, clearly, this isn't exactly the place where you should be looking for and mayhaps even demanding the story to be ORIGINAL. That's because, no matter how hard any author try, a fanfiction will always be that, an fan art that was made by a, obviously, fan who likes the original work. That's it. Original Idea or not, slap it in a fanfiction and it's already gonna reek of the same smell as the original story. If you want something original, go read the original titles in this site. There's many of them and your entire lifetime is probably not even enough to read all of them. Character Design. Enough said. The author chose characters from other original novels that he likes(maybe?) while trying his best to make them stay true to their characters. Whether he failed or not is up to your view about it. I'd like to say that he did quite well but it obviously needs more work, a lot of it. From what I heard, he even went as far as reading the original material a few times to get the info he couldn't get from the fandomwikis. Updating Stability. This fanfiction updates pretty much everyday. This novel started in around November and it's now in chapter 160. What can you say about the update schedule? World Background. This one hasn't been explored too much so I can't say much about it. Overall, this novel is not for someone who likes to read a novel filled with developments each and every chapter. I myself read this to pass time and to just chill around. Well, I hope this will help you future readers in deciding whether or not you want to read this work or not.
Ls verdad los capitulos me parecen demasiado cortos pero eso es bueno porque no puedo esperar haber que sucede en el siguiente capitulo y me encantan como interactuan los personajes haci que sigue haci no dejes la historia que esta buena compraria los capitulos por patreon pero soy pobre así que sigue así.
the story and character is good. All members of group chat is not too dependent to admin. there is also quest when admin is joined when he is go to another quest alone. Although admin is too op as he can use his character in game and member also too few. there is no random invite from member of another universe (anime or game). overall it's good novel to read. Well done!!!. hopefully thic can be over 1000+ chapters and involve more universe. Keep it up!!!
