Review Detail of Lunarian_King in Becoming The Admin Of A Dimensional Chuunibyo Chat Group Isn't Easy!
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- Generally the story is good, but MC feel a bit perfect (Mary Stu), master chief + got a good physique + good with weapons + intelligent + never got in problems + doesn't actually show any teenager like reactions considering that most of his friends are females 'no reaction what so ever just poor attempt to describe it' ; also his interaction with group member is too little, especially Rikka & Satanachia cuz he's either with Tama & Pochi or alone. - never saw all of them team up together, or having Shun tag along with them, its like he's avoiding everyone from his sisters & chag group members. - this affected my rating a lot, but I couldn't bear to give you any less, group chat members are meant to interact with. not to be avoided, otherwise why forming such group?
Becoming The Admin Of A Dimensional Chuunibyo Chat Group Isn't Easy!
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Yeah I noticed that too. However, I do have to point out that he isn't anything like a master chef as he just cooked everyday food. He isn't going into trouble because he is avoiding them. Now, onto the no reaction part, I think I've shown a few times that he is showing some reactions even if it's in a kind of light qbd joking tone most of the times like when Mutsuko stretched her body in front of him during their NWO quest. I think that's the problem with First Person's POV as everything is being shown in the MC's perspective.
He's also a previous assassin so what do you expect from him? Have phenomenal interpersonal skills or something? He'll develop as time goes by. Well, that's atleast what's happening during the time I'm writing this reply anyway(I'm talking about the current chapter I'm writing). Thanks for the honest review and more power to you going forward! Cheers!
JadePanda003:He's also a previous assassin so what do you expect from him? Have phenomenal interpersonal skills or something? He'll develop as time goes by. Well, that's atleast what's happening during the time I'm writing this reply anyway(I'm talking about the current chapter I'm writing). Thanks for the honest review and more power to you going forward! Cheers!