Bad_Bishop
Read till chapter 68. I will give my honest opinion plot with the world setting very interesting and makes you want to read. However, MC has close to zero redeemable qualities. Also, he indirectly has a green hat on him. One of his love interests I guessing his mom or lover from previous life gets ample love for a long time by some mayor before our MC. This is a deal breaker for a lot of you, so be warned. Also, the sequence of the story seems to jump around and sometimes might get annoying. If you can ignore the above, it's a read
The quality of the writing is grammatically good, however the way the sentences are structured is confusing, throughout the novel the author corrects this problem but constantly confuses the names of the characters. Good narration, without much confusion, plot well done but simple, but manages to surprise you. Good characters, the protagonist too, he is quite complex although it doesn't seem like it at first, he is basically a hostage of circumstances and most of the things he has done is because he is forced by his curse, around chapters 300 he has a good control over himself and in general talks what else he is pretty harmless (with innocents) but only close to chapter 300, because before that he has no control over himself, the world building is not complete yet either. Three-dimensional characters and very alive by the way, although sometimes they don't have much screen time and Irena is my favorite heroine. By the way, why an elf on the cover? So far no elves have appeared lol
While 4 and half stars isn't the best review possible, it is now my second highest I belive. This novel certainly took me for a joy ride and was certainly a different take on what I would normally read. So far the novel has stayed true to the tags, yes including the dark tag so if its your first time reading one maybe not this one. The author did a good job giving info related to the plot while also not just dumping it right in my face and the writing has few errors but they do exist. The story is written decently with good pacing and few moments when felt frustrated at how the plot rolled out, but that's probably because I certainly wouldn't have done some things the mc has. The character design is what I felt is lacking the most, the mc doesn't seem to change not matter what happens, while the side characters were actually decent. Each having their own "flavor" as you call it. I honestly have no clue about the updating stability and will only give 5 stars to the ones I know. So far the background seems to have a lot of turmoil, with plenty of things happening and giving hints.
The grammar is impeccable. There are a few minor writing errors, but they can be overlooked. It doesn't affect while reading. The chapters, so far, have been updated every day for a month, which is fantastic. Evary gives me the vibe of an adrenaline junkie. I can already imagine him having thrilling fighting scenes with his life on the line throughout the story. Overall, I find this book very fascinating. Highly recommended! Keep up the good work!
MC is interesting and show potential, unlike many others. This already means character development is in progressβ¦ The story background is shown smoothly, and nothing unnecessary is mentioned. So, all good. Iβm not going to talk about the story because it'd be better for you to find out on your own how good it is. Overall, itβs a great read. Give it a try.
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