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anonimo_af1mthPostedVery good. At first he was confident and charismatic (1-30), then he became quite confused (100-130), then he kind of rediscovered himself, he understood himself so to speak, although I don't find him particularly likable, he still recognizes his flaws and he gradually improves as a person and I even started to like him (274), the fights are well done but could be better and patience is also necessary because the author really likes to extend things, it was a great read, now I'll wait and store some chapters and read again
- anonimo_af1mthReplied to Pythia
On the contrary, this is a +18 story with almost nothing +18, including one of my dissatisfactions, it's like a story with a comedy genre but without comedy, only now it has a bit of ero and it's already been 200 chapters...
Without another word, I leaned in and captured her lips. - anonimo_af1mthReplied to Derkkill
Human morality is not indicative of maturity, in fact morality itself is ambiguous and depends on the country in which you are.
"Oh Satan's." She chortled, covering her mouth again. "As cute as my other grandson is, I could never think of him that way. I changed his diapers, I could never unsee that." - anonimo_af1mthCommented
And they are also blood relatives
"No, I think they'd get along well, and then get into a fight for fun." She deadpanned. "That muscle head is…admittedly very likable in his bluntness, so I'm sure they'd get along if Wilhelm wasn't so….distant." - anonimo_af1mthCommented
That's good, rin should have mc or no one, it would be weird otherwise
[When you see a woman who catches your eye.] - anonimo_af1mthCommented
No, no no no, that would turn my stomach so much that I wouldn't be able to continue reading
Thorum didn't take offense. "I shall slay any spiders that approach you, Miss Tohsaka" - anonimo_af1mthCommented
This is unpleasant, I hope she stays with MC or Shirou, if there is none it would be better for her to be single until the end of the series, it would be very frustrating to see Rin with another guy, my heart would hurt a lot
"I have no ulterior motive. I'm just genuinely curious and wondering if you've found someone you're interested in." - anonimo_af1mthCommented
but once, the arc had no purpose, initially I thought that the MC would go on vacation and then force himself to solve his family problems, but no... then I thought he would develop romantic relationships, but no... then I thought he would become stronger... none of that happened, he also didn't develop his personality, his personality was much better at the beginning of the work with the promise of traveling the world and making a harem with courage, but that wasn't it. ..so what is the purpose of this arc? Show how lethargic he is? How is he no longer willing to try to nurture feelings and eventually love a woman?
So MC's first meeting with momma fox. So I had it pointed out to me that I was meandering too much on the 'vacation' aspect of this arc, so I decided to move time tables up and finish this first DxD trip a bit earlier than I initially intended. Probably in 2-4 chapters, over on my pat re on. Then it's back on the grind for the next world. - anonimo_af1mthCommented
Honestly the MC at the beginning seemed much more stable, now he is irritating, hesitant and full of melancholy, author there is something called a proposal, every story presents a proposal in the beginning, the proposal of this story was an MC casually getting involved here and there and so if you wanted to stay with something for a long time he would slowly build up feelings, now he doesn't get involved casually with any woman and isn't even willing to harbor feelings, you basically deceived the readers, besides this entire arc was wasted, not the purpose in it, are you on vacation? They are meaningless, in fact it seems that the MC has become worse or instead of better and the story is becoming frustrating
It would just complicate things in my life and there are no true feelings there beyond physical attraction. - anonimo_af1mthReplied to oscar1234
Yes, but don't forget that she is a demon, maybe you are thinking too much about human common sense, when she is a demon
"Yes, I'm sure." She drawled. "Would he even want to come meet me at this point? Or did my idiot son poison my cute little grandson already?" - anonimo_af1mthReplied to RandomBrowser
So don't read any stories with harem, resolved, or you keep constantly complaining that you don't want to see a harem while reading a story with the harem tag?
She disappeared almost immediately into her room, leaving me there brushing my hand against my cheek. - anonimo_af1mthCommented
Wasn't he going to learn swordsmanship?
Well, shit, now I need to find someone else to teach me…. - anonimo_af1mthReplied to marcelll3214
in fact, she is not in a medieval world where making a harem is not uncommon, she is a human woman with common human sense, right?
"I don't…." She paused, having trouble finding the words. "I will not get angry if you find a mortal to produce offspring with." - anonimo_af1mthReplied to Ewan_Shin
I don't think if she could have children that would stop him from having a harem, he is brave enough to propose a goddess, do you think he would be afraid to make a harem simply because he wanted one?
"I can't give you children." She said plainly. "Is it not the desire for mortals to carry on their own lines with offspring?" - anonimo_af2mthCommented
Dude, it's okay that the narration isn't that good, but the lines aren't... you have to do the lines right
Demeter: I don't know when we are about to fight Kronos zeus just becomes so angry and he said to us to run and stop the army March he said he will handle it all t... - anonimo_af2mthCommented
The lines are killing the scenes. First, conjugate the lines at least... Also, use "" instead of zeus:
Zeus: Do any of you want to feel what happens when 1 billion volts run into your body. let's experiment with it I also want to know how much you all can survive it. - anonimo_af2mthCommented
If it is in a vacuum, it can almost reach the speed of light
2. The Speed of Lightning! 1/3 of Light speed, the speed of 100,000 km/s! This is a speed that I can reach when becoming Lighting itself! Though it's not the same speed, relatively a lot slower since I seemingly need to increase my mastery over my divinity to reach 100k km/s - anonimo_af2mthCommented
leave bell as it is, no reason to change, and it would be nice to have the original bell otherwise it would be like the world revolves around mc and that would break the immersion of being in danmachi
Question - should make I the original Bell ( Mc of danmachi ) or should I make a Female bell?? - anonimo_af2mthCommented
Helping people if there is no problem is really a good thing, imagine if everyone did it? Helping people before helping yourself is... brain dead
He also tries to relate him to Yuno because both are blind, but they are kind and think of someone else before themselves. - anonimo_af2mthCommented
Naturally the way you write dialogues will be different from the original author, but don't forget that this is a medieval era and these people don't speak like that either in the medieval era or in the history of danmachi...
"Hell yeah, I would! What can Freya going to do? 'mind fuck me' Yeah she will get blacklisted by all the smithing Familia's and then her psycho Familia will collapse within a year." Tsubaki all but sneered before shrugging.