CKM_Manga_World
Keep up the good work. This is a promising story. Relatable and unique mc! Don't go to beta road plz and Is there any romance afterward? Quite different writing styles, but I saw too many missing or misused punctuation. And how about recheck the excess spacing and some capitalization? Overall is nice!
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Ohh It got me curious how will the story end hahahha cause this feels new to me, the story is so unique and I love it! I can't wait to read more chapters of this story the first chap got me curious through the whole story gotta read more of this tomorrow cause gotta go to sleep now. Author-nim keep it up an amazing story!, [img=fp][img=recommend]
The plot is very nice and the characters are relatable and unique with their own personality. The only problem is that the way you present the story. Proper use of punctuations, capitalizations, and grammar could be improved, and also you could show more attitude in the characters’ dialogues. Other than that, the whole story is amazing and worth reading! You'll love the characters :)