Review Detail of TheALONEMan in Awakening Legacy : Rise of the Underlord

The plot is very nice and the characters are relatable and unique with their own personality. The only problem is that the way you present the story. Proper use of punctuations, capitalizations, and grammar could be improved, and also you could show more attitude in the characters’ dialogues. Other than that, the whole story is amazing and worth reading! You'll love the characters :)