Rachael_Olawale
This novel was lit! Good grammar and writing already have such quality! Slight edits that have to be made and boom! It will be a bomb that will explode in my mind. I can't wait to see it coming! Nice narration and point of views. Already veteran when it comes to switching Third-person narration and first. I am quite jealous of the author's writing quality itself. All in all a good hooking read! Nice! 👍
This is super interesting! The plot really shows that this story is going to be much different than any other story I have read! I simply love Aurora and I can't wait for what fate holds for her in the future. She is really a mysterious character for me. Also, I like the idea of how you give different povs to every other character- so we can know what they're thinking. Jasper is also an interesting character and I'm quite intrigued with what will happen next
LOVED THIS NOVEL! Captivating storyline. I liked the starting and the story developed pretty well in further chapters. Story detailing is clear and the writing style is well written. I'm totally shipping for Aurora and Jasper. I liked the author's creative and unique ideas in the story. added to my library. Keep up the good work, Author!
Wow, you're honestly superb with descriptions that it was easy-peasy to create vivid scenarios in our heads. I am a sucker for strong female leads so seeing Aurora all fierce and dominant really make me giddy and proud. I also must say you wrote a super intriguing synopsis. My only personal recommendation are avoid using excessive punctuations(personally, I don't find it nice) and please be gentle with flooding us with characters and their POV(I felt kinda overwhelmed). So far the story is going smooth sailing and I'm thrilled where it begins to go down crazy and hyped. PS. The novel's cover photo rocks!!!