nope...

not yet but hopefully.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

haha sure thing bro... TX for the support btw

I'd like to point out this is a ruthless MC who was born to slaughter, so if you're still interested in reading, go ahead.

I'd like to point out this is a ruthless MC who was born to slaughter, so if you're still interested in reading, go ahead. I like an evil MC, in a cultivation world. And not some kind of anti-hero...

later on, he'll be ruthless... xD

He's not totally detached yet early on, at his journey though he will.

he is no saint.

no ntr

hope you won bro hehe

The plot is interesting. So far there are 11 chapters, so deciding on whether the story's development would be hard. The characters are pleasant and well described. The author seems to have a unique writing style. With the use of uncommon descriptive words, the author was able to grab my attention. I have no complaints when it comes to the world background and stability of updates. Keep up the good work author!!!

ty for the feedback... I'll change it shortly.

Even though I’ve barely started this book, I’m already enthralled by the story. Though it was slow, to begin with, the pace certainly picked up quickly. It's an awesome storyline, to begin with, and I'm loving every minute of it. Cant wait to read how this will end. Author, you did a great job... Kudos to you!

yes

This book has an amzing start. It immediately hooks you in, and makes you want to continue reading. A lot of books drag you along without anything exciting happening, but I like how you are immediately dropped into the action.

A few grammatical errors here and there, a good concept of the mc, I loved it as there's a dash of Mmorpg in it, which am a big fan of since I was a kid, overall the world building is great aswell and I'm expecting more from this book... The main problem that I have is low stability on updates!! Author, put some elbow grease on it, and I shall thank you for your hard work... :)

psst Mel, did you win the wpc on this novel?

I liked it. especially there was no confusion in reading it and that was which i loved a lot. grammar is excellent and the plot is awesome. so overall it was awesome

Overall I’ve found this book very entertaining. All the characters are cute in their own ways. I think the main character just gives out a vibe like a real person would do. Good story development, and a unique reading experience. All in all, great work! 5/5