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Andrew_Oak

Andrew_Oak

Lv2

Naruto, Potter, Jack London, Bruce Springsteen, Coppola, Al Pacino, Michelle Pfeiffer, my mother, my nasty brother.

2020-04-09 JoinedRussia
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Commented

    It's a good start. Good luck and success.

    Ch 1 The first approach
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    Strike Force: Legacy
    Games · ArkAnghel
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Commented

    Summer. Internship. A lot of work. No time to write. A hiatus until the autumn. Sorry :(

    Ch 103 Maria in Bandit City
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    Galaxy Duel System
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Heavenscreation

    The hero is too young for a romance

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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Eternal_Pathfinder

    genius idea. i agree that some methods can be applied. alas. i have to describe the system of ordinary primitive labor

    Colony Europe 9 had about two hundred years of history. It was founded by Europeans. A large part of the immigrants was French and members of the French military organization "Foreign Legion". Sentient cats allowed humans to settle on the planet of their star system. Humans paid for the right to live in the Galaxy. The colony was located above a deposit of valuable raw materials. These were M-Crystals. Mix-crystals were part of, particularly valuable metal alloys. Mining mix-crystals was associated with health hazards. The particular radiation ruined the miners. This radiation destroyed any electronic mechanisms. Mining could only be done by living humans using simple tools. Humans proved to be valuable neighbors and newcomers to the Galaxy. Humans' ability to use the magic of Water allowed humans to use new magical ways to heal. Healers successfully fought the dangers of working in the mine.
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    Galaxy Duel System
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to B1ueKnight

    you're right. He will have strength and speed.

    Ch 3 Birthday Present
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Posted

    Very interesting story. Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

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    Dawn- An age of Darkness
    Fantasy · Nr_Yet1208
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Lerynia

    I'm not 10 years old. Lee is not the age to talk about friends and girlfriends with a sexual connotation.

    The friends did not waste any time. They boarded a small two-seater flyer and flew toward the cliffs. Lee was smiling. It was a good adventure. The night. A good girlfriend. And a mysterious ancestral cave ahead.
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    Galaxy Duel System
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Lostbookworm

    Absolutely right! An icy attack slows movement and freezes the enemy. Now - in chapter 80 Lee develops exactly ice attacks. In the beginning he focused all of his development on the Healing skill.

    Unfortunately water magic had no 'debuffs', this type of magic had no spells to weaken the enemy.
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Azure_raven125

    I agree with you. But Lee saves mana to develop the Healing skill.

    He didn't waste any mana. It makes sense to pay attention to the tournament finalist skill. But why waste mana trying to learn an unknown skill? He has many skills of his own that require development.
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Commented

    Unfortunately I have temporarily stopped publishing new chapters.

    Ch 17 A Modest Reward
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    Magepolis
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Dan_Crow_2033

    I am interested in the idea of ​​developing a new planet and building a strong state.

    Ch 67 How to Rob Slaveholders
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to schumelcka

    I like the idea of extensive nation-building.

    Ch 65 Beginning of Dialogue between the Two Races
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to YawningBrain

    Thanks for the review. I will try not to be boring and continue to build up the story with bright characters and events.

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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to saygon

    Great idea

    Ch 63 Dinner on the subject of slavery and tyranny
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to YawningBrain

    Thank you. I'll try to keep the level as high as possible.

    Ch 1 We be of one blood, thou and I
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to Lua_Kai

    Thank you. I'll try to keep the level as high as possible.

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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Posted

    The first chapter of this book is a great example of how to capture a reader's attention. I had great pleasure with the author's style and artistry. The story is not an easy one. The world is pretty seriously described, but it's a magical realism, it's not a superficial tale for easy reading. The plot is good, I miss the sharp, powerful igtriga! I hope the author can create an unexpected twist in the plot to make the story even more attractive. Thanks for the creativity! Good luck.

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    Infinite Immortal Murder
    Urban · Lua_Kai
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Posted

    A great story that creates a nice and sympathetic mood. I loved the dynamics of the story and the details of the world in this book. Especially the personality traits of the characters in the book are nice. Thank you for your creativity author and good luck with the sequels.

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    Re: Hero Camp!
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Posted

    Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

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    The Magician Queen
    Fantasy · YawningBrain
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  • Andrew_Oak
    Andrew_Oak2yr
    Replied to ustom

    They are like Ewoks, but more aggressive and really want to go to space!

    Ch 61 First Summit of Two Races
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    Galaxy Duel System
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