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Adwaid_Nambiar

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2021-01-21 JoinedIndia
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Posted

    This is a big improvement from when I read this story the last time. The pacing is flawless, not too fast and not too slow. The characters are better fleshed out and dialogues feel natural. This story showcases the kind of pressure that a lot of Indian teenagers face when studying abroad. And how sometimes it's just outright stupid. The bond between the friends is well fleshed out. It was a enjoyable read, anyone looking to read a good slife-of-life novel should definitely try this one out.

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    The Fantastic Five.
    TeenPrajnya Shriyan
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Posted

    I have to express my admiration for this piece of work. The story's beginning is intriguing, with minimal exposition, allowing readers to form their own ideas about its direction. Anastasia and Emily are both appealing characters, although Emily is my personal favorite. While the world-building unfolds gradually, it is multi-layered, which sustains the reader's curiosity. The dialogue is excellently crafted, and it appears natural. As I am only on the sixteenth chapter, I am already having a delightful time reading it and eagerly anticipate how the story unfolds. Great job and keep up the good work! 馃憤馃徎

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    Red Blood Century
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Commented

    That would terrify me

    The strength it used was extraordinary and very aggressive like someone was dying to come out of it. Thinking that their attempt was failed the thing inside it got furious and started banging the door like a crazy maniac with so much force and started screaming.
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    Red Blood Century
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Commented

    LMAO

    Only Vloggers can do that stunts, not me.
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    Red Blood Century
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Commented

    relatable

    I really don't know how to lie in important situations. That's why I always get caught.
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    Red Blood Century
    Fantasy RomanceRomanceFanatic028
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Commented

    idk if that's a good thing or a bad thing now

    "Grandma?"
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    Red Blood Century
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Posted

    Although I'm not particularly fond of romance novels, this one managed to captivate my interest. I was pleasantly surprised by the way the story unfolded and the portrayal of the protagonist. It's safe to say that this novel goes beyond the typical romance genre and delves into various themes that are handled with skill. One thing that stood out to me was how the novel challenges the morality of the characters' actions without making excuses for them. This aspect of the novel was particularly thought-provoking. Overall, the story was well-crafted, and I am eager to read more chapters since there are currently only a few available.

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    Sweet Intention
    Contemporary RomanceStardreamer12
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Replied to Stardreamer12

    Thank you for your honest feedback! I've received similar criticism in the past and I understand that my unconventional writing style may not be for everyone. However, my intention was to create a cinematic experience for the reader, which is why I use a script-like writing style. As a thriller, I strive for a fast-paced and information-dense story, which is why I avoid excessive descriptions and encourage readers to interpret the scene for themselves. I am aware that some readers prefer more clarity in character dialogue and emotions, and while I don't plan on changing my format completely, I will try to incorporate your feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my novel and for your support! 鉂わ笍

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    THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST
    Horror&ThrillerAdwaid_Nambiar
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Posted

    In my opinion, writing a fantasy novel can be challenging as it's easy to unconsciously mimic other works. Therefore, it was refreshing to read something different. I enjoyed the way the author introduced the main character and how the character was written. Although there are a few mistakes, they don't significantly affect the reading experience. The author's world-building is impressive and deserves appreciation. The pacing is good, although some may find it too fast. I liked the story and will probably keep on reading. Good job馃憤馃徎

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    EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
    FantasyNinestar619_5803
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Posted

    Undoubtedly, this piece of work boasts a remarkable atmosphere that makes you feel the room and the overall tone of the place thanks to the author's excellent descriptions. The writer skilfully creates tension when needed and a sense of calmness when the plot thickens, making the pacing spot-on. The story of Kai and Sia is intriguing, and I am eagerly anticipating where it will lead. Honestly, I cannot find any criticism to give as the story is well-written as well as engaging, and is still at it's early phases with less chapters. I won't reveal too much about the story's elements to preserve the readers' experience, but I am personally impressed by the quality of this work and am looking forward to reading more chapters.

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    A Holy War: [The war between mortals and gods!]
    FantasyLa_wyrd
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar5mth
    Commented

    I have n idea where this is going, and it's excites me even more

    Ch 1 Unknown
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    A Holy War: [The war between mortals and gods!]
    FantasyLa_wyrd
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Posted

    I really liked the story. Narration is very well done! Every member in GALAXY have a distinct characteristics which was honestly pretty enjoyable to read. I also liked how the story moves with a certain pace and doesn't feel too fast. But I do think Arete's character needs more exposure! Other than that I really liked reading this novel. As there is only 8 chapters now, I'll be eagerly waiting on the future chapters. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR!

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    NOW LICENSED UNDER POPINK
    Fantasy RomanceBlackpaint
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Posted

    Synopsis had me thrilled! I thought that author gave away a lot of plot under synopsis, but seems like there was a lot more to the story! I really loved the gory details of the crime in the first chapter, it really was a selling point! This feels a lot like Death Note but for not the obvious reasons, a book with rules that can control your fate. And it was a new thing for me personally when it comes to transmigration. I do have few critic though. There are some punctuation errors, because of which some dialogues and sentences can feel too lengthy. But it can be easily overcome once the editing of chapters will start. And I also think that the cover does a disservice to the novel and should be worked on as most of the readers will judge the book by it and rather than the content inside it! And as there aren't much chapters yet so I feel it will be wrong to do a unnecessarily harsh critic yet, as the author still has soo much to offer! But meanwhile, I really liked the novel and will be looking forward to the upcoming chapters! Keep up the good work author!

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    鍒櫎锛
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Commented

    This guy's suffering just doesn't end

    The rocky surface scratched and tore his skin which caused him to hiss in pain but he didn't stop untill he was all the way back to where he had first woken up.
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    鍒櫎锛
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Posted

    I read this novel and it's slow! And that's not a complain but a very big compliment indeed! I was able to go through every emotion the MC was going through. And the parts where the MC mentions about his love for his lover, they are pure poetry! And element of Sci-fi is just the cheery on top! As the story plays out in year 2050, the history of world counting the ones that author made were something I really liked to read. So far I haven't really found any prominent mistakes. Honestly, I am completely invested in the book and would love to recommend to read it!

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    3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.
    Sci-fiGaureeey
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Commented

    That's love in first sight for me!

    I sat into my newly upgraded machine and turned the clock's hour hand three hours before me. I put my headset on, and there she was, across the street, waving at me with the most delightful smile ever. Her straight caramel hair flowed with the warm breeze. Her supple pink-tinted lips rested on her beautiful and soft whitish skin, her beautiful body that she secretly hated so much wore the most exquisite yellow dress I have ever seen that complimented all her curves. Her eyes resembled loops of honey shimmering in the summer sun. Her tiny, freshly manicured fingers held a stick of raspberry sorbet that awaited me.
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    3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.
    Sci-fiGaureeey
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Posted

    The cover and synopsis had me excited. The plot is very interesting. It's a well written story. Th world building and dialogues are really well done. I found the start a bit confusing but as I continued reading things become clearer. I really liked it, and would like to recommend others to read it!

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    Becoming Monster
    FantasyMackaina
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Posted

    I liked the story. There are some grammatical and punctuation errors that are instantly caught. The initial fight scenes get a little confusing because of the loads of imagination it takes but it's written very well. The dialogues between Asher and Tiara as they meet for the first time is written very well, I enjoyed their back and forth a lot. First major twist comes at the end of 3rd chapter which I feel is good pace for such a story. I loved the way 5th chapter started and how brilliantly was Ashers thinking process is showed in the 5th and 6th chapter. With passing chapters reader can see the research and study the author has put into this story and I totally love such intelligent pieces. I would recommend a little work on the errors but other than that I feel this novel definitely deserves attention. And keep up the good work author!

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    Disoul
    Sci-fiARnab
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Posted

    It was a pleasant read! Honestly. I haven't finished reading but as far as I have read, it's really nice! I loved the MC and his personality. There are minor errors here and there but nothing that will ruin the reading experience. This novel has a really good worldbuilding. In short, I am really enjoying reading this. Keep up the good work!

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    Conquer the world with Skills
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  • Adwaid_Nambiar
    Adwaid_Nambiar2yr
    Commented

    Get a new processor man!

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    Conquer the world with Skills
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