This is a big improvement from when I read this story the last time. The pacing is flawless, not too fast and not too slow. The characters are better fleshed out and dialogues feel natural. This story showcases the kind of pressure that a lot of Indian teenagers face when studying abroad. And how sometimes it's just outright stupid. The bond between the friends is well fleshed out. It was a enjoyable read, anyone looking to read a good slife-of-life novel should definitely try this one out.
I have to express my admiration for this piece of work. The story's beginning is intriguing, with minimal exposition, allowing readers to form their own ideas about its direction. Anastasia and Emily are both appealing characters, although Emily is my personal favorite. While the world-building unfolds gradually, it is multi-layered, which sustains the reader's curiosity. The dialogue is excellently crafted, and it appears natural. As I am only on the sixteenth chapter, I am already having a delightful time reading it and eagerly anticipate how the story unfolds. Great job and keep up the good work! 👍🏻
That would terrify me
idk if that's a good thing or a bad thing now
Although I'm not particularly fond of romance novels, this one managed to captivate my interest. I was pleasantly surprised by the way the story unfolded and the portrayal of the protagonist. It's safe to say that this novel goes beyond the typical romance genre and delves into various themes that are handled with skill. One thing that stood out to me was how the novel challenges the morality of the characters' actions without making excuses for them. This aspect of the novel was particularly thought-provoking. Overall, the story was well-crafted, and I am eager to read more chapters since there are currently only a few available.
Thank you for your honest feedback! I've received similar criticism in the past and I understand that my unconventional writing style may not be for everyone. However, my intention was to create a cinematic experience for the reader, which is why I use a script-like writing style. As a thriller, I strive for a fast-paced and information-dense story, which is why I avoid excessive descriptions and encourage readers to interpret the scene for themselves. I am aware that some readers prefer more clarity in character dialogue and emotions, and while I don't plan on changing my format completely, I will try to incorporate your feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my novel and for your support! ❤️
In my opinion, writing a fantasy novel can be challenging as it's easy to unconsciously mimic other works. Therefore, it was refreshing to read something different. I enjoyed the way the author introduced the main character and how the character was written. Although there are a few mistakes, they don't significantly affect the reading experience. The author's world-building is impressive and deserves appreciation. The pacing is good, although some may find it too fast. I liked the story and will probably keep on reading. Good job👍🏻
Undoubtedly, this piece of work boasts a remarkable atmosphere that makes you feel the room and the overall tone of the place thanks to the author's excellent descriptions. The writer skilfully creates tension when needed and a sense of calmness when the plot thickens, making the pacing spot-on. The story of Kai and Sia is intriguing, and I am eagerly anticipating where it will lead. Honestly, I cannot find any criticism to give as the story is well-written as well as engaging, and is still at it's early phases with less chapters. I won't reveal too much about the story's elements to preserve the readers' experience, but I am personally impressed by the quality of this work and am looking forward to reading more chapters.
I really liked the story. Narration is very well done! Every member in GALAXY have a distinct characteristics which was honestly pretty enjoyable to read. I also liked how the story moves with a certain pace and doesn't feel too fast. But I do think Arete's character needs more exposure! Other than that I really liked reading this novel. As there is only 8 chapters now, I'll be eagerly waiting on the future chapters. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR!
Synopsis had me thrilled! I thought that author gave away a lot of plot under synopsis, but seems like there was a lot more to the story! I really loved the gory details of the crime in the first chapter, it really was a selling point! This feels a lot like Death Note but for not the obvious reasons, a book with rules that can control your fate. And it was a new thing for me personally when it comes to transmigration. I do have few critic though. There are some punctuation errors, because of which some dialogues and sentences can feel too lengthy. But it can be easily overcome once the editing of chapters will start. And I also think that the cover does a disservice to the novel and should be worked on as most of the readers will judge the book by it and rather than the content inside it! And as there aren't much chapters yet so I feel it will be wrong to do a unnecessarily harsh critic yet, as the author still has soo much to offer! But meanwhile, I really liked the novel and will be looking forward to the upcoming chapters! Keep up the good work author!
This guy's suffering just doesn't end
I read this novel and it's slow! And that's not a complain but a very big compliment indeed! I was able to go through every emotion the MC was going through. And the parts where the MC mentions about his love for his lover, they are pure poetry! And element of Sci-fi is just the cheery on top! As the story plays out in year 2050, the history of world counting the ones that author made were something I really liked to read. So far I haven't really found any prominent mistakes. Honestly, I am completely invested in the book and would love to recommend to read it!
That's love in first sight for me!
The cover and synopsis had me excited. The plot is very interesting. It's a well written story. Th world building and dialogues are really well done. I found the start a bit confusing but as I continued reading things become clearer. I really liked it, and would like to recommend others to read it!
I liked the story. There are some grammatical and punctuation errors that are instantly caught. The initial fight scenes get a little confusing because of the loads of imagination it takes but it's written very well. The dialogues between Asher and Tiara as they meet for the first time is written very well, I enjoyed their back and forth a lot. First major twist comes at the end of 3rd chapter which I feel is good pace for such a story. I loved the way 5th chapter started and how brilliantly was Ashers thinking process is showed in the 5th and 6th chapter. With passing chapters reader can see the research and study the author has put into this story and I totally love such intelligent pieces. I would recommend a little work on the errors but other than that I feel this novel definitely deserves attention. And keep up the good work author!
It was a pleasant read! Honestly. I haven't finished reading but as far as I have read, it's really nice! I loved the MC and his personality. There are minor errors here and there but nothing that will ruin the reading experience. This novel has a really good worldbuilding. In short, I am really enjoying reading this. Keep up the good work!
Get a new processor man!