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ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master

Author: Dragon15681
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Read ‘ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master’ Online for Free, written by the author Dragon15681, This book is a Book&Literature Fanfic, covering ACTION Fanfiction, ROMANCE Fan Fiction, ADVENTURE Fanfiction Net, and the synopsis is: WARNING:First of all, English is not my primary language and there will be spelling and writing mistakes!Oh, and I don't...

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WARNING: First of all, English is not my primary language and there will be spelling and writing mistakes! Oh, and I don't have an Editor, so there are wording mistakes! Synopsis: Reborn as average Clan Member Xiao Long tries to be as average as possible, but things start to derail when you awaken a system. After all, when you have a system you are the MC. Regardless, of the system, Xiao Long will try to continue to be what he always suppose to be...just an Average Young Master

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Six-years-war has ended, by the strength of only one man. สงครามหกปีสิ้นสุดลงแล้ว ด้วยพลังของชายเพียงคนเดียว Everyone calls him "Swordmaster". ทุกคนเรียกเขาว่า “ซอร์ดมาสเตอร์” Unfortunately, this is not the story of such time of glory, bloodshed and..... แต่โชคร้ายที่เรื่องนี้ไม่ใช่เรื่องราวแห่งเกียรติยศ การนองเลือด และ.... Ruby: Sola, why don't you just tell them that this is the story of a man in a harem full of beautiful flower girls. รูบี้: โซล่า ทำไมเธอถึงไม่บอกพวกเขาไปล่ะว่านี่คือเรื่องของผู้ชายในฮาเร็มที่เต็มไปด้วยสาวดอกไม้แสนสวย Almond: Could you not disturb her? This is the most important part of our story, and it could decide the future of us all. อัลมอนด์: อย่ารบกวนเธอได้ไหม? นี่เป็นส่วนสำคัญที่สุดของเรื่องราวของเรา และอาจจะตัดสินอนาคตของพวกเราทุกคน Ruby: And I want to ask you why the novel cover doesn't have me on it? Since I'm the main heroine and all. รูบี้: ฉันอยากจะรู้ว่าทำไมปกนิยายถึงไม่มีรูปฉันอยู่บนนั้น? ฉันเป็นนางเอกนะ Sola: I am so fed up with pen tool.. uh... better not talk about it. So, we used a photo of flowers instead, and I think you are not the main heroine. โซล่า: ก็ฉันสุดทนกับ Pen tool แล้ว เอ่อ...อย่าไปพูดถึงมันจะดีกว่า เราก็เลยใช้ภาพดอกไม้แทน แล้วฉันก็คิดว่าเธอไม่ใช่นางเอกหรอก Almond: It's a budget cost too. Those artists charge us over US$200. We are broke. Plain and simple. อัลมอนด์: มันยังเป็นเรื่องงบประมาณด้วย ศิลปินพวกนี้คิดเงินเราแพงถึง US$200 พวกเราไม่มีตังแล้ว ก็แค่นั้น Ruby: That's really expensive, huh. รูบี้: มันแพงจริงๆด้วยนะ Sola: Could you girls stop talking? So, I can continue with the synopsis.... โซล่า: หยุดพูดกันหน่อยได้ไหม? ฉันจะได้เขียนสรุปเรื่องต่อ.... Ruby: I don't understand why this is so important. รูบี้: ฉันไม่เข้าใจว่าทำไมมันถึงสำคัญนัก Sola: Ruby, listen. If we don't have a good synopsis, people will not buy our book, and then..... โซล่า: ฟังนะรูบี้ ถ้าเราไม่มีสรุปเรื่องที่ดี คนก็จะไม่ซื้อหนังสือของเรา แล้วจากนั้น.... Iris: Then what? I want to know it too. ไอริส: แล้วยังไงต่อ? ฉันก็อยากจะรู้เหมือนกัน Sola: Then there will be no book 2. โซล่า: ก็จะไม่มีเล่ม 2 Iris: No book 2, so what? Why should I care? ไอริส: ไม่มีเล่ม 2 แล้วยังไง? ทำไมฉันต้องสนใจด้วย? Sola: Our universe will collapse, and we will disappear forever.. โซล่า: จักรวาลของพวกเราก็จะยุบตัวลง แล้วพวกเราก็จะหายไปตลอดกาล... Iris: What did you say? ไอริส: ว่าไงนะ? Almond: Well, too late now. You talked too much. We have run out of writing space... อัลมอนด์: สายไปซะแล้ว พวกเธอพูดมากเกินไป เราไม่มีเนื้อที่เหลือจะเขียนอะไรแล้ว.... Ruby: What!!!!!NO!!! I don't want to DIE!!!!You do something sis!!! I should have done that human thing with our lord when I still had a chance. Noooooooo...... รูบี้: อะไรนะ!!!!!ไม่!!! ฉันยังไม่อยากตาย!!!!ทำอะไรสักอย่างสิคะพี่!!! ฉันควรจะทำกิจกรรมของมนุษย์กับท่านลอร์ดตอนที่ฉันยังมีโอกาสอยู่ ไม่นะ ไม่...... Iris: Buy it now. People!! Yes, I mean, you!! YES! YOU!!! BUUUUUUUUUYYYYYYYYYY.... ไอริส: ซื้อเลย ทุกคน!!! ใช่ ฉันหมายถึงแกนั่นแหละ!!เออ!!! แกนั่นแหละ!!! ซื้อ!!!!!!!!! Iris is shouting as loud as if this is the last moment of her life, but no one listens. ไอริสตะโกนสุดเสียงราวกับว่านี่คือวินาทีสุดท้ายของชีวิตเธอ แต่กลับไม่มีใครฟังเลย

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hellenator
hellenatorLv5hellenator

This is really good. no problem with grammar, the story pulls you in, and the MC is very interesting, can hardly wait for next update.....................

Yoh3t
Yoh3tLv4Yoh3t

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Draul_TheOminous
Draul_TheOminousLv13Draul_TheOminous

I never drop reviews, rarely even, but I have to say, just don't drop. Please🙏. This is hands down the best ATG fanfic I've read

Rovontheus
RovontheusLv4Rovontheus

In what way is this average young master? Don't you know the meaning of average? Fine he hid his cultivation but all the bigshot and his harem knows his true cultivation so whats the point of hiding it? Just to face slap some younger gen cultivator? What a misleading title hence the low rating

Fck_You_Web_Novel
Fck_You_Web_NovelLv4Fck_You_Web_Novel

I regret reading all the advance chapters in discord. Now, I need to wait for more. Fu##!!!!!!!!!!! As always, Author create another amazing stories. Pls. Dont drop

Demonification
DemonificationLv13Demonification

Writing quality is good except for a few wrong grammar and spelling. Idk anything about the updates Story development is like slice of life a little too slow to my liking Hated the MC's naive way of thinking and showing all of his secrets except for the system. Imagine not leaving a trump card for yourself and just bare it all for others to see World background is just ATG

Aozora_Ai
Aozora_AiLv10Aozora_Ai

Maybe this is an ATG fanfic with a slice of life where the storyline is relaxed and it's so relaxed that you get tired of reading it. So far his strength development is quite different from the OG version of his own ATG which is to increase strength through diligent cultivation and inheritance. Whereas this uses an enhancement method from another xianxia world that is using pills. so much explanation thank you.

_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv4_VIIX_

Another great ATG fic by Dragon. "Man against the Gods" is by far the Best ATG ff I have ever read. And this one goes even above and beyond that. I didn't know that I liked this genre until I tried this. On to the details:Writing Quality(5/5): The author is no amatuer. He's been writing for a while and that shows. Forget about grammar and spelling(it has none of that issue)... the writing style itself is engaging, it's relatable and a reader can flow through the writing. In my opinion it is a good example of "Show, don't tell" while still avoiding jargons in the text to meet a word count quota. The ratio of dialogues and narration is just great.Story development (5/5): This is probably my favourite part. Because most of the ATG ff I've read pretty much follow the same path as YC. Meanwhile here Author doesn't shy away from getting his hands dirty or sidetracking from his destined path. But in essence he created a totally new story with a MC with a totally different perspective than the cultivation pros while not losing the actual essence of ATG world. Basically it is a new story inside the ATG world.Character Design(4.8/5): I love it when fanfiction authors deviate from canon while still keeping the source world integrity stable. It is particularly hard to execute in wish fulfilment fics as at one point the world gets changed so much that you don't really get anything of the source material anymore. Here we have a MC from modern times, with many other experiences. His focus is not cultivation but clan building. What's norm for the cultivators is ridiculous to him. Does that stop him from doing his own thing? Absolutely not. Does he wait and gloat his superior methods on anyone's face? He doesn't have time for that. He simply does what he does best and strives for more. In turn leaving the arrogant ones in the dust. let's leave MC and get to the side characters... It's gonna be a massive harem and that's to be expected of a clan building fic. He acquires a lot of women. and not everyone gets enough screen time. But the important ones are thoroughly fleshed out. Even more than the original, they aren't simple cultivation machine with 1d persona. Here they have their own crafts, hobbies, wants and needs. They have depth to their character.Updating Stability(5/5): You check for yourself. The published dates should be enough of indication about the consistency. World Background(4.9/5): It's your standard world of ATG with some modern ideas modified for 'profound' things sprinkled in the background. Some are exciting, some are not. But that's a matter of personal preference. One thing though. Unlike the original here you don't unlock world phase by phase and forget about the previous part behind. Here it's much more focused on getting all things together. Making it cohesive rather that layered.Overall a great ATG story that I'd recommend to every ATG fan.

s0ulz
s0ulzLv3s0ulz

Excellent story with great writing quality and world background not to mention the consistent update, The character design and the way you present their emotions and thoughts are quite entertaining and life-like not to mention how the main characters unique thought process has led to him being able to make world changing pills and artifacts with simple items or even mixing separate fields such as alchemy and runes. Overall the story is amazing and I am sure as the plot progresses into the higher realms the quality of the story will only continue to improve with Xiao Long gaining access to new materials and legacies

OlyasidlO
OlyasidlOLv4OlyasidlO

The story is very entertaining and relaxed. It could be said that it focuses more on how the MC develops more of his abilities and how he uses them to break the common sense of the world in which he finds himself. But you can understand why, the MC thinks outside the box and doesn't focus on increasing his strength with the already established methods. The "how can I improve certain aspects of cultivation" is always present, be it with alchemy, matrices, etc. I especially liked that he is realizing the importance of the energy that everyone uses to cultivate, he understands that it is moldable, it can have different attributes, present in everything. Basically, he's achieving "The Dao Of Profound Energy" hehe. The harem could be said to be a secondary bonus, it's not that relevant apart from getting girls (Pokemon), but I really like the interactions he has with his wife and the occasional girl. Especially, the point of view of the girls means that they are not just decorative vases, with this it is understood that they exist and have personality. I recommend improving the interactions with the other characters, since the novel could become a monologue of the MC. Of course not everyone wants chapters with unimportant dialogue, but at the same time it gives the other characters an authentic flavor. For example, I like the MC's first wife, her inner thoughts of being jealous of her or her acting spoiled is nice. I'm not an author, so not how hard it is to make those small changes. But you can say that this fan-fic has potential, so the author should take his time and decide if it is feasible to achieve them and not go against what he seeks to convey in this fan-fic. You can't have the best of both worlds. So I'll see where this fan-fic goes.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Control_FREAK
Control_FREAKLv4Control_FREAK

I don't read much cultivation related fan-fic but after reading it I knew.....It was perfect ..Yeah but as I said it WAS perfect untill it got into Pokemon collection. I don't have hate to "Harem" genre or "Romance". I can tolerate upto 4 ya 5 myself being a "Single romance" guy. But above that ...it's meaning less. Like plot moves around MC and collecting females like this will make fic's value drop you know just becomes a "Gotta catch them all" and it's sad to find out a good fic downgrade. Story development is great, word quality and grammar stuff are also too nice. It's a great read minus this Pokemon collection thing. Overall experience: Fic's great, nice read, had a good laugh. Ps. If the Harem is controlled like concentrated to 5 or 6 this will become a wonderful fan-fic. Hope you guys have good read ahead 👍

Reincarnated_008
Reincarnated_008Lv4Reincarnated_008

plz don't drop this like your other stories because this is a very good fanfic plz complete it 🙏💯

Emanuel_Manu
Emanuel_ManuLv4Emanuel_Manu

well what do you expect it's dragon

Piezy
PiezyLv5Piezy

I already read ahead on your discord, I really enjoy your story. The writing style is great and the user is OP right at the beginning. I lool forward on how thia develops.

walls21
walls21Lv3walls21

It is very good, for me it is a breath of fresh air since the mc is dedicated to exploring deep energy and not only for fights and others, but also to create things (which I loved) exploring matrices, runes, language, etc It is no longer a common cultivation story where as long as you are one kingdom higher you are the maximum, this story for me was about an ingenious mc where he takes advantage of everything and exploits it, something that is rarely done in cultivation novels. Are there other novels like this? Where the Mc does not focus so much on fighting but on creating things, for example machines, matrices, science fiction things, etc. [Google translator]

Zerot_Solar
Zerot_SolarLv6Zerot_Solar

A work of art there’s no words to really describe how amazing this is…

3PoundsOfRice
3PoundsOfRiceLv53PoundsOfRice

I love it, I think this story shows your growth as a writer in more ways than one. The only problem I have is discord xD. I already joined, but I can't seem to find any stories, I don't have access.

Cupidos
CupidosLv4Cupidos

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Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12Culture_Lover

It's nice to read a novel of yours based on ATG's verse again, it's always refreshing. I hope you can finish this great fanfic :) :) :) :) :)

Maulann
MaulannLv4Maulann

This fanfic is good. Recommended for you to read 👍👍👍

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