Review Detail of Demonification in ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master
Review detail
Writing quality is good except for a few wrong grammar and spelling. Idk anything about the updates Story development is like slice of life a little too slow to my liking Hated the MC's naive way of thinking and showing all of his secrets except for the system. Imagine not leaving a trump card for yourself and just bare it all for others to see World background is just ATG
ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master
Dragon15681
Liked by 7 people
LIKEReplies5
Conveniently forgetting his triumph cards:Developing means not to die, like OP regeneration, ability to reincarnate, creating his broken bloodline from mixing godly legacies, and learning True God Language and using it in runic arrays/formations which he can cast from moments noticeAnd those are his 'triumph' cards.Writing a review from barebones chapters looks absurd.Just my opinion when there are over 150k words more to read you develop those triumph cards as that's the whole point of the story's progress. I get the idea that he has none when the book is at its end, then it would make no sense.Even in the early stages mc already had his triumph card in the form of a powerful regen which he never shared with anyone, even his wife đđđ
Fine. Youâre right. Making an early review is a lil ridiculous. I had to stop reading at ch 13 because I was too frustrated with your mc. Your MC is like a beta jp mc who doesnât know how to take advantage of others. I would understand if it was a world like earth but ATG? The rule there is the rule of the jungle. Any advantage you have, keep it to yourself and your close ones. Why let others know that you can open profound entrances when even yun che doesnât advertise that he knows it, except for his own people.
Dragon15681:Conveniently forgetting his triumph cards:Developing means not to die, like OP regeneration, ability to reincarnate, creating his broken bloodline from mixing godly legacies, and learning True God Language and using it in runic arrays/formations which he can cast from moments noticeAnd those are his 'triumph' cards.Writing a review from barebones chapters looks absurd.Just my opinion when there are over 150k words more to read you develop those triumph cards as that's the whole point of the story's progress. I get the idea that he has none when the book is at its end, then it would make no sense.Even in the early stages mc already had his triumph card in the form of a powerful regen which he never shared with anyone, even his wife đđđ
He doesn't do? He unlocked all the entrances to the whole Fronzen Cloud after seeing 6 naked fairies and there are thousands of them.His pills don't even open all entrances unless they are heavily consumed. He earned more than anyone for selling grass one grows on the riverside.By the end of it, he earned more than anyone, from becoming Young Master which was only possible because of his honest nature to becoming Feng Xue'er fiance.All I can understand from your complaint is that you want him to be greedy and horde stuff unreasonably because of paranoia about what happened with YC who was hunted down because of his status as someone who has Heavenly Truesure and being from 'Demon Continent'
Demonification:Fine. Youâre right. Making an early review is a lil ridiculous. I had to stop reading at ch 13 because I was too frustrated with your mc. Your MC is like a beta jp mc who doesnât know how to take advantage of others. I would understand if it was a world like earth but ATG? The rule there is the rule of the jungle. Any advantage you have, keep it to yourself and your close ones. Why let others know that you can open profound entrances when even yun che doesnât advertise that he knows it, except for his own people.
Dragon15681:He doesn't do? He unlocked all the entrances to the whole Fronzen Cloud after seeing 6 naked fairies and there are thousands of them.His pills don't even open all entrances unless they are heavily consumed. He earned more than anyone for selling grass one grows on the riverside.By the end of it, he earned more than anyone, from becoming Young Master which was only possible because of his honest nature to becoming Feng Xue'er fiance.All I can understand from your complaint is that you want him to be greedy and horde stuff unreasonably because of paranoia about what happened with YC who was hunted down because of his status as someone who has Heavenly Truesure and being from 'Demon Continent'
Yeah, and that's what is happening. But you don't like the fact that he is hoarding/buying an entire continent with river grass. đ
Demonification:Yes. I want him to hoard and be greedy. Nothing wrong with that.