Review Detail of Control_FREAK in ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master

I don't read much cultivation related fan-fic but after reading it I knew.....It was perfect ..Yeah but as I said it WAS perfect untill it got into Pokemon collection. I don't have hate to "Harem" genre or "Romance". I can tolerate upto 4 ya 5 myself being a "Single romance" guy. But above that ...it's meaning less. Like plot moves around MC and collecting females like this will make fic's value drop you know just becomes a "Gotta catch them all" and it's sad to find out a good fic downgrade. Story development is great, word quality and grammar stuff are also too nice. It's a great read minus this Pokemon collection thing. Overall experience: Fic's great, nice read, had a good laugh. Ps. If the Harem is controlled like concentrated to 5 or 6 this will become a wonderful fan-fic. Hope you guys have good read ahead 👍