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"Easier than I thought... Six wargs, should I take them all and form a small pack? Six wargs, hmm, I have fitting names for them," Narzug mused and then said aloud, "You are Ghost, Nymeria, Summer, Grey Wind, Shaggydog, and Lady," pointing to the various wargs one by one. "And since Lady is the biggest of you, you'll be my mount!" Narzug commanded, and the wargs understood his intentions. They weren't just dumb mounts but had their own tribes and communities in the wild.- Control_FREAK10dCommented
Malbulul..?!
Seeing the troll approaching, the dwarves grabbed their weapons and prepared to fight, but were surprised to see a furious Aldril unsheathe his sword and signal as he shouted, "Aard!". - Control_FREAK10dCommented
Bombur Bombing
"Ugh! Damn it, Bombur, what the hell did you eat?" said Glóin as he backed away from Bombur. - Control_FREAK10dCommented
Oh ik ..I'm just tripping. Leave my earlier comment it was idiotic. Ik you might/ not / have added bloodline so it correlates. My bad
"Maybe it's because of my constitution or something else hidden in my body, but I tend to learn things very quickly," I said to myself as I wiped my sweaty face with a rag and looked towards the camp. - Control_FREAK10dReplied to Kaisen1
Man, ik the consaequences and even the mc is aware of it I was just telling what if.... He is been built as The anomaly so he can anything. Though I do know monsters will spawn here and there if he killed her. Just a what if..from my thoughts.
If this were the past, I would've felt bad and might've even gone out of the way to help her fulfill everything she wanted before she would've died, but ever since I learned that this world doesn't allow you to screw around, I needed to change my perspective on things. - Control_FREAK14dCommented
MC:
"What a great way to start." I said and ran down the mountain before the disaster that followed could catch me. - Control_FREAK15dReplied to DaoistWDfd8h
I applaud your way of giving us idea of it. Thank you. This is not everyday you see a webnovel author try to give us his imagination and I'm all for it.
[Picture] - Control_FREAK16dReplied to Kilaske
There are many meaning to this name: Here, the author is portraying the name in sensing of "trolling" as in "mocking". He used Yharnam as this name is the name of a town which is in a game called "Bloodborne" and he used that name here.
A decent sized castle with black walls and painted black too. There is a moat surrounding the castle to further test future invaders. As a troll I decided to call it Yharnam. The castle will be manned by the bastards of our line. They will still have the name Snowstark but an extra 'Of Yharnam'. - Control_FREAK16dCommented
I can see that Author has lost his bet to his friend or won?!
1. Dhruv Lakdawalla: 25 Points - Control_FREAK16dCommented
LESSSS GOOOOOOO
I grab my brain and place it inside the barely alive curse. - Control_FREAK16dCommented"So it doesn't make me stronger all at once. I need to practice these new moves and skills first in order to get stronger. In that case, I'll have to practice over the course of the trip."
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I can't judge because I am not perfect to review others. But honestly, I like the way you portray them. Just keep your mental health up and voila
How do you like my writing? I have found that unlike other authors, I focus a lot on the dialogues. - Control_FREAK16dCommented"Mmm, let me think. Only the lady Elwing the Beautiful comes to mind, a woman who was blessed by the great valar Ulmo. She was blessed with the gift of becoming a white bird that radiates beauty and a light comparable to the stars."
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Bro is the one
Aldril had a sight that caused him to chuckle a little, as all the ponies were around Shadow Star, as if they were praising him. - Control_FREAK16dCommented
Nah, Eowyn and you get stones.
Taurel as a romantic interest or Éowyn with the fact that she is human and sooner or later will die, so take your pick! - Control_FREAK16dCommented
Mc after seeing the reality of it:
"Nah, I'd win." - Control_FREAK16dCommented
Sure will, and keep on keeping up buddy 👍
Hey there! It's your favorite author! I've been reading "The Lord of the Rings" wiki, and my goodness! I've been getting a lot of ideas about our protagonist's origin, so I hope you like what I have planned. Remember to support me on Patreon, where I'm uploading advance chapters. - Control_FREAK16dCommented
Bro that's the cancer of this app.... I can't understand how NSFW is getting promoted like hell ...y can't you be satisfied with one but you need to have a Pokemon collection It's just messed up . Sometimes I think to write a fic where it would be antiharem in some of these fked up animes
And apparently there are few who like the lord of the rings, I've seen DxD fics that are barely published in one day and you already have thousands of readers even though the fic is terrible. - Control_FREAK16dCommented
wha-?
"Without a doubt, an exceptional horse, I don't think you have realized that your horse is a descendant of Felaróf Father of the Mearas, lord of horses and the horse of Eorl of Rohan, you have with you one of the best horses in all of Middle-earth" Gandalf said, as he laughed upon seeing Aldril's surprised face. - Control_FREAK19dCommented
fk the world then...you are The anomaly
If this were the past, I would've felt bad and might've even gone out of the way to help her fulfill everything she wanted before she would've died, but ever since I learned that this world doesn't allow you to screw around, I needed to change my perspective on things.