Reviews of Ascending to Supremacy
Ascending to Supremacy
Sinning_Sovereign
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Its really hard to read the first arc without dropping this but after reading the other reviews, I will read 2nd-3rd arc before deciding whether to drop this or not. But seriously author, you will need to refine the dragonball arc since you will lose a lot of potential readers, also dont just add every girl you find into the harem, they lose their characters if you keep increasing the harem that even you shuffle their name you won't notice the difference. This review is strictly from the first arc so I will probably change this later after reading more. Also English is not my first language so sorry for my crappy english.
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First world DBZ - the writing was not great there was a lot that could improve, but there was constant improvement. The whole arc was not too long and the story slowly found its way. The Mc's character development was getting along the way. Overall for a new writer it was a decent start. Second world Bleach - This was the best arc, the writing had improved greatly and the story was done well and there was decent plot, interesting character and MC and his powers was controlled very well which created a lot of interest. If by itself I would rate it 4.8. Third world - DXD - The worst arc so far. While the writing has improved, the plot is gone, the Mc is personality is gone. The power level is terrible. The whole arc reads, there is a war, he comes waves his hand everything is over, no plot. He starts a children breeding ground. He no longer pursues women and his personality turns more towards a dense Japanese type MC. Quite frankly very boring and most reason for dropping the rating under 4 stars. He forgets his force, his goals and is just an overpowered idiot. I don't really see much future at this time point, I will read some more but I don't know if I will like it. On the contrary to bleach where is women actually contributed something the few new one that he manage to add to his harem in the beginning are names with the only personality trait being that they were played by gods.
To be honest,.... This novel really have so many cliche.... Until now his strength is like an spicy Chicken..... His sense doesn't even can cover an entire planet or realm...... Even though he has gone to three world.... His strength like doesn't grow at all....from being the fifth strongest person in dragon Ball to now.... Its like his strength is depleing...you are too rushed to Write your novel.... Your concept is already good to be op MC novel... But you ruined it all by how you write your power tier in your novel... Your power tier concept is really a mess
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All tho the author has good writing and some originality, he doesn't know the story line for dragon Ball and DBZ. I'm not saying he did a bad job but with the timeline that he started with and how he preceded with the story doesn't add up. He says a lot of confusing and conflicting information that just stops me from continuing this story. I suggest you (author) to do some research and fix your earlier chapters. DBZ is an iconic anime/cartoon. Have to do research on stuff like this to prevent poor quality in the timeline
20 Chapters in, MC is very dumb and weak. MC’s system basicslly gives him free stuff for the shop and he never uses it to buy Body Tampering Pills or anything to make his body stronger, his descicions are stupid and there are some plot holes, I heard someone say it gets better after chap 40, So after chap 40 I’m going to come back and review again.
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