To be honest,.... This novel really have so many cliche.... Until now his strength is like an spicy Chicken..... His sense doesn't even can cover an entire planet or realm...... Even though he has gone to three world.... His strength like doesn't grow at all....from being the fifth strongest person in dragon Ball to now.... Its like his strength is depleing...you are too rushed to Write your novel.... Your concept is already good to be op MC novel... But you ruined it all by how you write your power tier in your novel... Your power tier concept is really a mess
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