Review Detail of HOS in Ascending to Supremacy

Its really hard to read the first arc without dropping this but after reading the other reviews, I will read 2nd-3rd arc before deciding whether to drop this or not. But seriously author, you will need to refine the dragonball arc since you will lose a lot of potential readers, also dont just add every girl you find into the harem, they lose their characters if you keep increasing the harem that even you shuffle their name you won't notice the difference. This review is strictly from the first arc so I will probably change this later after reading more. Also English is not my first language so sorry for my crappy english.