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Review Detail of DaoistglcrYM in Ascending to Supremacy

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First world DBZ - the writing was not great there was a lot that could improve, but there was constant improvement. The whole arc was not too long and the story slowly found its way. The Mc's character development was getting along the way. Overall for a new writer it was a decent start. Second world Bleach - This was the best arc, the writing had improved greatly and the story was done well and there was decent plot, interesting character and MC and his powers was controlled very well which created a lot of interest. If by itself I would rate it 4.8. Third world - DXD - The worst arc so far. While the writing has improved, the plot is gone, the Mc is personality is gone. The power level is terrible. The whole arc reads, there is a war, he comes waves his hand everything is over, no plot. He starts a children breeding ground. He no longer pursues women and his personality turns more towards a dense Japanese type MC. Quite frankly very boring and most reason for dropping the rating under 4 stars. He forgets his force, his goals and is just an overpowered idiot. I don't really see much future at this time point, I will read some more but I don't know if I will like it. On the contrary to bleach where is women actually contributed something the few new one that he manage to add to his harem in the beginning are names with the only personality trait being that they were played by gods.

Ascending to Supremacy

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** first review at chapter 150