Springs_Halo
For novel readers who have a lot of reading experience General fantasy world structure The plot is nothing new. The protagonist wants to get better and better. without a clear goal The story is looped. [[The protagonist goes to compete with friends > The protagonist hurts the contestants > The contestant or the angry family must eliminate the protagonist before he grows > The protagonist escapes > The protagonist and friends eliminate the hunted > The protagonist adventures and continues to compete]] Another serious blind spot in this story is that the 'plot armor' is very strong, the protagonist is always protected by Mother Kob's protector. In addition, the relationship between friends His is nothing interesting and annoying in some events. I don't know how this novel got such a high rating. But I personally have to give this novel a medium to low rating.
this story would be absolutely perfect if the author would just update more often or at the very least on a set schedule, I'm all the way caught up and I even have the privilege chapters but the author doesn't update the story regularly or the readers on why not, either of these and it'd be a perfect score from me
i absolutely love this novel.....ofcourse there are some plotholes and unnecesary dialogues but the story has great potential. Its the author's first novel and one cannot expect to be any better....keep up the good work Author san......and please dont drop it, not until you introduce Grey's love interest....[img=recommend]