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Pls don't drop this novel, one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I read in this app. I truly hope that u continue this work. Regarding the novel, it has a good mixture of game elements in it without being overly 'important', and those elements come from his own gift in Divination, the author made a 5 star job in that. The only critic I can make is regarding is thoughts in creating an 'army' /group etc, I don't mind if it is like 10 people or so max, but more than that and I'm gonna start getting annoyed by it, because to me personal strength and growth are the most important thing, but that's just my opinion and I won't stop reading this novel even if the author decides to create an 'army' for our MC
A very well written novel that takes under explored parts of the Harry Potter Universe to tell an engaging story. There are few mistakes and most parts are well explained and keep you reading for more. There is actually a system and game like elements, but fear not, they are not over powering like you see in some other novels (There is a good balance and I think it fits well). I would definitely recommend you give it a try.
This story is well thought out and written. The main character is an original character but not a self insert. The author takes the time to build his world carefully and that is certainly appreciated. The most interesting part of the story is the divination talent of the main character and the introduction of a soft-system. The system offers an advantage to the main character but certainly does not make him overpowered. Overall, I am very satisfied with this Harry Potter fanfic and will continue to read it.
This story in my own opinion is fairly well written, has an enjoyable pace, and is detailed enough to understand background information. Magnus character and personality is refreshing and branches off from the main story, without being too obnoxious. Overall, I cannot wait for the Author to publish the next chapter in this amazing story.
I hope the author returns to continue this novel, itβs one of the best fan fictions on this site and a brilliant standalone book in its own right. Wonderful characters, great development, huge potential for seeing more of the wizard if world and weβre now getting into the seriously interesting parts of the mcβs development. Please continue the story, author
This is a great novel, even with minimal knowledge of the potter-verse itβs still an outstanding experience ce to read it. I thoroughly enjoyed the development of the mc, in particular the early chapters where he is introduced and his situation begins to play out. I initially thought the system, when it was introduced, would take away from the novel however it proved to be a very,ow level of impact to how the story progresses and the mc isnβt given a cheat through a system like a lot of other novels which keeps this story engaging and fun. Really hope the author continues to write this story as weβre into the early stages of the philosophers sfo e and I really want to see how the story progresses