Liked the chapter, fight scene was good, not expecting major magics in it as it’s still schoolyard stuff, nice inlsion of the spectral wolf and windless magic. Liking where this is going - dumbledore seems to be establishing an alibi if things go wrong or outside his planned manipulations “But I alerted the Ministry through the DMLE, I told Amelia, by Merlin!” Nice job, author-san!

That should be GrimReaper - stupid autocorrect, but I wonder what a resper is that it defaulted to it lol

Thanks GrimResper for the chapter!! Hope you’re well again soon!

Love it!! Great chapter, thanks author!!! still loving this book, as always love to see more :)

Well that was a little unexpected! awesome to have you back and to see this story continuing!

This is a great story with excellent character development! Love getting an outsiders perspective to Hogwarts and the Wizarding World that’s not the usual time traveller or transmigrator. Always entertained by the MCs commentary on how things are being done

Great chapter! Always good to get the different perspectives and Savrin’s thoughts on what’s being taught were great

Great story, interesting premise and a power up with an interesting cost! Really want to see where this goes from here! Please come back author!!

Loved the beginning of this new story - looking forward to seeing it progress! Hopefully the author updates soon! Really liked the concept of transmigrating with no idea how to unlock abilities (would hate to have it happen in real life especially with the associated costs) but great idea to start from

Love the idea that it was a prank that kicked off using broomsticks! Great chapter, looking forward to reading more

This is a fantastic story with an amazingly novel approach! So far there’s been great character development with plenty of scope to expand and enough teasers to really keep it interesting; the storyline is great and it’s fantastic seeing an outsider’s perspective who thinks that sometimes the hp wizards can be not that intelligent lol. Hope the author continues to progress this story and looking forward to reading more!!

Love this story - awesome concept, great execution and really looking forward to seeing how this all plays out

Really like the start of this story! It’ great to see something a bit unique in how the system works and I’ love to see how this story progresses. Hopefully it gets enough votes to continue

Love this - very cool concept and a unique introduction to family magics

Hope the author continues this story, it’s been great so far and seeing the mc finally recognising he’s not all powerful when he has almost no experience is awesome to see. How he gains more experience and grows the possibilities of his Skyrim/hp/mcu abilities should be great! Please return author!!!!!!!!

I love this story! I’m not usually a big fan of crossover fanfics because I find the, either allowing the mc to power up too rapidly or become needlessly complicated in trying to include all of the crossover originals. This story doesn’t have that problem and while the mc does obtain abilities quickly to start its apparent that he is still lacking in experience which nicely offsets his strength. Great story, wonderful progression and I’m excited to see what happens next. Hopefully the author comes back soon because they’ve quiet on all the novels I know they write.

This is novel take on the potterverse! I really enjoyed what’s been published so far (15 chapters) and hope to read more! A few inaccuracies in the muggle timeline like computers in a house in 1966 & some of the weaponry available to One of the MCs but that could be explained by being in an alternate universe, not really enough to take you fully out of the story but enough to be noticed as you go along.

Overall a fun read, great AU with the WBWL premise. Looking forward to seeing where the author takes this. Hope they come back to this story soon and keep developing this story

Great fun! Are you going to continue this book?

Great fun! Are you going to continue this book?