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Review Detail of Aedan in A Web of Magic

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Pls don't drop this novel, one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I read in this app. I truly hope that u continue this work. Regarding the novel, it has a good mixture of game elements in it without being overly 'important', and those elements come from his own gift in Divination, the author made a 5 star job in that. The only critic I can make is regarding is thoughts in creating an 'army' /group etc, I don't mind if it is like 10 people or so max, but more than that and I'm gonna start getting annoyed by it, because to me personal strength and growth are the most important thing, but that's just my opinion and I won't stop reading this novel even if the author decides to create an 'army' for our MC

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