Review Detail of Kilian in A Web of Magic

This story is well thought out and written. The main character is an original character but not a self insert. The author takes the time to build his world carefully and that is certainly appreciated. The most interesting part of the story is the divination talent of the main character and the introduction of a soft-system. The system offers an advantage to the main character but certainly does not make him overpowered. Overall, I am very satisfied with this Harry Potter fanfic and will continue to read it.