DaoistOeHtln
Hi, I'm coming back to these comments to share my point of view. The fic is good but the main character has become too op in so little time and you made huge skips over time. Especially since I would have liked to see him fight against heads of families or even Zahard lol. As far as the Axis are concerned, I know that we won't be doing much with them in the future since SIU has said that they don't want to make Phataminium or even other Axis appear because they are much too strong for Tower (After this is in the future, Baam becomes an Axisđ¤ˇââď¸ ). So I think it's better to invent the abilities of the Axis in this fic or at least add some since we know that the Axis are capable of changing Reality in a certain area or writing their own story (and then it's not like you didn't change the canon a lot because Enrhu is not an Axis unless you didn't know it, and if you ask how I know it's thanks to the SIU blog).Of course, and it's you who decides what you should do in your fic ;)