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Idk feels like this fanfic is going out sad… there’s no real goal for the mc so he just goes with the flow he has no ambition either so it just feels really boring had some faith in this fic too but… this Fic it’s just not tht intersting it was great when it first started
Tbh idk it’s at chapter but it just feels slow & boring mc doesn’t really feel special either even though he has a system he’s in Tamara weight class so we don’t even really know anybody he’ll be fighting and next it’s chapter 20 but nothing significant happened you met ippo joined the gym and sparred couldve been done in 3-4 chapters
Impossible right ? After being trained by noa being ambidextrous and now having neymar level foot skills he is still last rank
Definitely this he already said trust no one
Absolute BEAST you’re making here
Kenpachi zaraki ??? Ok love it already
Bro NOBODY is questioning you.. you just keep making this phenomenal fic & he did get the GREATEST talent of all time nagi can’t compare with that
Well true but at this point in the story the one piece is just a treasure it’s really the journey finding Damien’s crew and getting stronger that’s the most entertaining where will he go from here what’s his next steps because when this fic first came out it had new ideas never seen in a one piece fic before haki bones making your supreme sword even the pulverizing devil fruit anyway I think by the time they find the one piece or become the strongest they will transfer worlds I can see Damien not wanting to conquer even more worlds
I have absolute faith tht Damien and his crew will become pirate king first and also will be able to beat luffys crew hands down
This is literally one of the best ideas the author ever came up with
I swear he was a D.