Thank you for your advice, and you're right, I'm clearly an amateur at writing lol. And also the fact that Baam (Grey) has not yet made any significant change is simply because he is too weak so I find it a bit vilogige that he is already changing the course of history even though he is an Irregular . And also, I will take note of the tools that you advised me to improve my writing and my grammar, frankly that's what poses some problems for me, it gives me headaches looking for complex sentences to describe scenes or what people feel without it being a repetition of words. Thank you for your comment .😉

It's not drop, I just rest and think about how I can describe the scenes in words, without it being a repetition. The new chapter will arrive either tomorrow or the day after tomorrow (maybe more lol)

I'm not saying anything more, but there will be quite a power up after the crown game, well not really towards the end of the crown game but you get the point ;)

Hello everyone, I just checked the chapter and I was able to see the catastrophic spelling mistakes I made, so I just corrected them, I advise you all to reread it haha

Hmmm, maybe, after all the Shinsu is unlimited,therefore it will surely have the elementary Shinsu qualities, but it will especially have the Black Shinsu, I'm not saying more 🤫

Well, I'm basing it on Regis's refs, after all the knowledge of this majestic wolf comes from Grey's memories. And to answer your question, yes. I decided that this will be the case to make it a little funnier.

Ooops, I wanted to write weapon lol

Thank you for clarifying it's a small error, my English is bad so I use a translator 😅 And also, you don't have to worry. The story will not only follow the canon, there will surely be some copying and pasting in the beginning but there will be a big change later, but I won't say more 😉

Haha thank you very much, I made some mistakes because mo. English is bad and I use a translator 😅

Great job, when is the next chapter?

Hi, I'm coming back to these comments to share my point of view. The fic is good but the main character has become too op in so little time and you made huge skips over time. Especially since I would have liked to see him fight against heads of families or even Zahard lol. As far as the Axis are concerned, I know that we won't be doing much with them in the future since SIU has said that they don't want to make Phataminium or even other Axis appear because they are much too strong for Tower (After this is in the future, Baam becomes an Axis🤷‍♂️ ). So I think it's better to invent the abilities of the Axis in this fic or at least add some since we know that the Axis are capable of changing Reality in a certain area or writing their own story (and then it's not like you didn't change the canon a lot because Enrhu is not an Axis unless you didn't know it, and if you ask how I know it's thanks to the SIU blog).Of course, and it's you who decides what you should do in your fic ;)

good start but is that giving up?

bro is already an axis 💀

Is this giving up?

Chapters will no longer be released here?