EmmaCruzader
Thanks for the update I’m glad that the Mc didn’t kill Omni man and is slowly changing him. Nolan redemption arc in the invincible comics is absolutely a great piece of work of Nolan changing his from viltrumite ideology and feeling remorse and lost of what he did. I also enjoyed how the Mc stock to his morals and that he isn’t a good gut or a bad his basically sort of in the gray or anti-hero area of things.
BRO I HAVE AN IDEA for mark to get stronger and have his genius tech, there's a hero in Invincible called Tech jacket that have this OP suit that boot the users natural power 100 times, this suit was created by the geldarians the smartest race in invincible universe, Read the comics its only 14 small vols. mc can get that suit and help the geldarian princess, he could even Add her in his harem since Viltrumites are compatible with all races. just think about it
I'm liking where this is going. You've managed to so far do the hardest thing superhero fan fiction writers have trouble with; Making the mc not be a edgelord. Typically I tend to be against grey leaning superheroes, but Invincible's source material isn't like other superhero comics. So having Mark be a bit colder will not be too alien from the source material. I still would like to see him prioritize saving a life over taking one, but I can understand why he would in this. I partially wished you had saved the guardians, but I'm okay with their deaths too. Please keep up the good work.