marcoo
Well at least now we have interaction between characters and it no longer feels like I'm reading a logbook, I liked the story so far it's very interesting his romantic partner is a bit dull but considering his age the most relevant female characters are or ten years younger or about twelve to fifteen years older, of course considering that it is something like the middle age these age differences are irrelevant, but at least there is a reason for choosing it even if it is more likely a way of not interfering with the canon of significantly with the choice of a main female character, but again I liked having at least an explanation for why she was chosen.
I was interested in editing this story, but unfortunately, I am a paid editor which is a major turnoff and the writing style doesn't match my expertise, to the point I will indulge too much and change a lot of things, making the story inrecognizable. I would strongly recommend going to discord fanfiction or ao3, as there are a lot of beta readers there who would gradually help you proofread this and that too for free.