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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki9h
    Commented

    It sucks to have an Uzumaki dying in labor.

    Ch 4 Chapter 03
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    Naruto: Fourth Hokage
    Anime & Comics · UchihaFamily
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki9h
    Commented

    So far no description of the MC's face.

    Ch 6 Embarrassedment Shower Dinner
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    Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+
    TV · Kagetanehiruko
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki14h
    Commented

    The story is really interesting but what kills me is his love interest Hermione is a definite no for me the story itself is very original but it seems that the author is one of Hermione's persecutors or better said Emma Watson, who despite being beautiful is Feminist trash.

    Ch 21 chapter 21 Guardian Angel
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    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Movies · INDRATH
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki16h
    Replied to Rk6T

    I agree that Tsunade is one of the best female characters in the Naruto work and yes she is very little used, I know that after becoming Shinobi they are adults and yet in the work there is no couple with a significant age difference, yes it would be very good if the MC wasn't almost completely apathetic and the last few episodes see a slight improvement in that but it probably has more to do with the other characters than with MC, not even the original Tobirama was that apathetic the MC almost seems like Danzo's wet dream, apathetic, emotionless and robotic who would fall in love with a character like that, Tsunade seems to have a very specific lover profile and even the people closest to her follow the same idealistic and emotional profile but of course this is fanfic it doesn't need to follow the personality pattern of the work original, one of the biggest problems is that the MC is very disconnected from Konoha and he has no real goal other than to survive and I don't doubt that the main events will follow the canon, perhaps a romance with Tsunade of the connection that the MC lacks .

    Ch 78 Chapter 78 Instructing
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki16h
    Commented

    Interesting story, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 Snape template
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    Harry Potter : Transmigrating as Cedric
    Movies · INDRATH
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki20h
    Commented

    This story is by another author, the tags don't even make sense, this story is clearly not a system story.

    Ch 17 Chapter - 17 :Paradigm
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    Harry Potter: Hero's adventure
    Book&Literature · P_L_H
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki1d
    Replied to CouchPotatoDandy

    Maybe, it's probably between her and Tsunade.

    Ch 78 Chapter 78 Instructing
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki1d
    Replied to Rk6T

    I don't know but I find it difficult to see Tsunade taking the MC to the series, the difference in age and experiences is a very important factor. I know she only had Dan as her boyfriend and fiancé but it's still very strange.

    Ch 78 Chapter 78 Instructing
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki1d
    Commented

    I'm glad you're back, I'm looking forward to the next chapters

    Ch 52 Information
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    Legacy of Harry Potter
    Book&Literature · Graviele
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki1d
    Replied to TheManUnderTheBed

    This Sigma Series

    Ch 40 Disruption of the Natural Order
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    Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic
    Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki1d
    Commented

    Honestly I'm getting tired of this story again the MC is useless and there's no explanation as to why he has no memories and his powers are at their lowest level again everyone thinks he's dead, I'm seriously thinking about dropping this story, I got here mainly because it's one of the things I look for most in young justice.

    Ch 40 Disruption of the Natural Order
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    Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic
    Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki1d
    Commented

    It seems that in addition to being robotic, the MC is asexual, not that there are any relevant characters for romantic interest for this eunuch MC.

    Ch 78 Chapter 78 Instructing
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki2d
    Commented

    What a dry story, one dump of information after another, apart from the time it takes to give a description of the fifth elder it's ridiculous I think it was almost a third of the chapter if not more, I made an effort to read this chapter, if I continue reading This story seems like I'm going to have to skip many parts because of the unnecessary information dump, these two chapters really discouraged me, they defeated almost all expectations of it being an interesting story.

    Ch 3 Conversation about The Byakugan
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    A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
    Anime & Comics · Hanma_Jack
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki2d
    Commented

    I was looking forward to the chapter and I wasn't disappointed, I'm even more looking forward to the MC's meeting with Elijah, things are going to be interesting to say the least.

    Ch 23 The Second Raid
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    Fighting, Honour and Valhalla || Vikings x Originals x TVD Fic
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki3d
    Commented

    Be careful not to overdo it, one of the many mistakes is the MC has a lot of bloodline limit release and in the end he barely uses one or two, which would be a very strange thing if the ninjas didn't try to dissect the MC for having a lot of limit of lineage, ends up becoming a cycle in which none of the scenarios is satisfactory.

    Ch 28 Small Time skip!
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    Naruto: Different Perks
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki4d
    Posted

    It's a really fun story if you don't really get into the series and it holds your attention, I'd say it's worth reading. I think if it were written seriously it would be an epic story.

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    Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
    Book&Literature · Agwinz
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki4d
    Commented

    The story is really fun and kept my attention for a long time.

    Ch 72 Kidnapping
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    Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
    Book&Literature · Agwinz
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki4d
    Commented

    It was a good start, I'm wondering if he will have access to magic proficiently, if he won't just be another Targaryen with a different surname but it was a really good start, the passionate intentions between brothers were really very good.

    Ch 1 / Chapter 01: Back Home \
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    House Of The Dragon: The Secret Dragon-Lord Of Valyrian's Descent
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki4d
    Commented

    Finally the story is moving forward, despite the MC being as charismatic as a door, with him being almost a robot the story in general is good only the MC has no personality or emotion.

    Ch 76 Chapter 76 Devious Mind
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • alef_Rilzaki
    alef_Rilzaki5d
    Commented

    The story is interesting but one chapter a week is very slow I almost always have to reread part of the previous chapter for you to understand what is happening in terms of the previous chapters I barely remember anything it's really a shame since it's a good story, despite the ridiculousness of the penultimate chapter everyone being kidnapped without anyone knowing or seeing anything.

    Ch 14 Chapter 13: Arc 2, Leaving II
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    New Valyria
    Book&Literature · Perseus_Blackfyre
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