I didn't understand the True Evolution technique very well, it can only be used once? I believed that Technida Great way is much better, basically at level 3 it already makes the whole body have the resistance of aco, So that ka would be a huge advantage, not counting the ridiculous regeneration and the great physical increase.
Nonsense, He is at marvel, He could have spent a few months learning, Training his powers and then returning to society, There is no risk of him being discovered because his ship Must have very advanced camouflage technology. And this is totally illogical, a crippled, traumatized "retired" military man abandoned by society is very eager to return to it.
Hahahah, In the end it ended up earning the nickname of the boy who lived, only instead of wer against Voldemort it's against Snape 🤣😂🤣🤣
so the mc doesn't have much time to play power it works right? I would offer the method of how top players are getting much stronger than normal players in exchange for money. would offer for a lot maybe 250k or more, chances are high that one of the millionaires who play the game will accept the offer, it could be written in a contract and everything. After that I would quit my job and focus 500% on the game.
I feel like I've seen a similar novel, I think mc had a store and his first world was Plants Vs Zombies
Focus should simply be on getting a lot of power, and it should be about changing history, because that just doesn't work, the butterfly effect is one thing.And why this fear of changing the future? There probably wouldn't be any time problems, because he didn't go back in time to change anything, he just changed his present, and the future is Always changing. As long as the mc does not go back in time to make any changes z bao no temporal problems should occur.
I'll give my opinion here, It's magic!!!! As a man from a mundane and completely normal world he needs to at least try to learn. If not, what's the fun of going to a world with that possibility? If it was simply a kingdom building story it was just doing a history of our world in the medieval era, there's no magic there, so it was just focused on kingdom building. So I believe that magic is essential, And even if he can't learn it he should try, He has money for it, knowledge is expensive.
I think this gold coin is overvalued, 10 thousand copper can feed 30 thousand people for 1 week? So basically each citizen spends only 0.04 copper per day, I feel that this is too little.
Wait a minute, does the MC want to go fight mephisto in his dimension? Where does he have much greater powers? He's basically a god in his own dimension.
Ignore the first sentence, I was going to write "I don't think the current method is bad" and it wasn't the don't. I think the current method of travel is good, I thought it was a great idea, it was just too rushed, they could have delayed several months or a few years. (Oh, but it can influence the future and blah blah blah So you're telling me that the death of the water god slayer, which won't happen anymore because they traveled in a hurry, won't influence the future? I think this is a pretty big butterfly.
I think the current method is bad, but I think it was too rushed, they should have spent a long time in the past preparing, doing research, adventuring and getting stronger, before simply abandon the past and all their lives to move to the future, they were in a stable period, without any crisis at the moment, it was the best time for them to progress. after all resolved, let the guild know they were going on a journey (no one needs to know it's for the future).
One detail that all writers tend to either not know or ignore is that the super soldier serum has side effects, well it actually doesn't, but it does... I'll explain,the effects of the serum are not only physical, but mental as well, so in addition to a huge increase in physical capabilities, the same goes for mental ones, so it basically turns the user into a genius, But the side effect of the serum is that it magnifies a person's personality traits, both good and bad.just have any bad traits that can totally distort your mindset, captain america was so special not because of the serum itself, but because he was already a paragon of virtue even before being injected with the serum, an average person with a result similar to the red skull (except the skull...) would probably have very low morals, an insatiable hunger for power, unscrupulousness and a high degree of sociopathy and it would probably be sadistic or extremely sadistic, basically a 90% chance that an ordinary person injecting the serum will become a monster.