BeixuanLovell
bro i'm the same with you i hate mc have a family just become his weakness i watch so many mc overpower but when his family get taken away his power just become useless she's just like a doglike this one so many fight to kill each other what happened next just become friend what the f***if i were me i'm going to kill his entire family
Welp, this chapters just a long drawn-out execution of your story. Random stupid deus ex machinas to try to make the mc look strong while also doing the equivalent of flailing around uselessly like the child catching the sword flying toward them with their hands and random church stuff that makes no sense within the timeframe and context you're forcing. Oh well, into the trash pile it goes.
probably going to give this another chapter or 2 before I drop. The MC is honestly the only thing bringing this fic down. good setup, nice use of system, good overall environment, but the MC makes repeated stupid choices, and honestly seems like more like a mob side character than an MC. There is almost nothing making me want to cheer for him or see him get better.