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  • Morty756483
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    Yeah, sure dude

    "Know the situation you are in, Miss Spellman, is your name Sabrina, or is it fake?" asked Luke. Before killing her, he had to do a quick interrogation.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Morty756483
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    Good chapter

    Ch 23 How to bulshit a dragon
    ATG: My genius is almost frightening!
    Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach
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  • Morty756483
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    Obviously he won’t

    Ch 40 Guilty discovered
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Morty756483
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    Impressive, one line of dialogue per chapter. Author is really moving this plot forward

    Ch 42 Act 1, Chapter 2: The Forest of Monsters 2 (Colors)
    How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game
    Fantasy · MCPG
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    Reflecting on my journey thus far, I realized that leveling up likely required me to engage in combat and defeat opponents.
    How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game
    Fantasy · MCPG
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  • Morty756483
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    This paragraph has been deleted.
    How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game
    Fantasy · MCPG
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  • Morty756483
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    ChatGPT amd word-filling are strong in this one

    Ch 2 Meeting Her
    How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game
    Fantasy · MCPG
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  • Morty756483
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    Didn’t Ben gave him his blessings to go die while heroing? I mean, not literally, but he did say that their lives do not matter as much as saving others

    "I say we wait until we can show results, then we can tell them, if we just go and show ourselves now, they're going to be worried about us all the time and they're going to try and stop us."
    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Morty756483
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    Overall good chapter, but author totally overdid it, strike through 59 floors? Yeah, I call bs

    Ch 36 [FGO]: 36
    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
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  • Morty756483
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    Bs, + he has his mask on

    The reason Ryou chose to stay at the Hostess of Fertility was, of course, to use the tavern's hidden strength and the power behind it to evade the pursuit of the Ishtar Familia.
    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
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    Out came a woman with short red hair and two girls peaking behind her. One of the girls was slightly older then Peter while the other one was the same age. 
    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Morty756483
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    lewd

    "I go to %&@*$ elementary, how about you?" 
    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Morty756483
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    Is this battle description?

    His punches packed a wallop, sending thugs flying as he defended the vulnerable. Yuta's focus was unwavering as he strategically took down each opponent, his movements fueled by a sense of duty and justice. And of course the rewards.
    MHA : Hero Time
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Morty756483
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    Rui is the only normal one out there

    Ch 8 8: Approved
    ReLife: I Got My Memories Back After My Ex-Girlfriend Cheated on Me
    Anime & Comics · Shuhjn
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    Nor was he in the world of Harry Potter since no letter came to him at the age of 11. Although Hogwarts was not in the United States there was supposed to be a magical school in the Harry Potter universe in the U.S., although he couldn't quite remember its name.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Morty756483
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    Thanks for the chapter, I really like this style more, chapters 14-18 were obviously written with AI and were unbearable to read.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: The Decaying Hyuga Clan
    Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
    Anime & Comics · INeedRest
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  • Morty756483
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    You changed the style of translation in this chapter, it became worse, more poetic to fill the words’ count

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Colt in Shisui's Words, Meeting Itachi
    Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
    Anime & Comics · INeedRest
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  • Morty756483
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    Dialogues are amazing. 10/10

    Ch 5 5: This War is Mine
    SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)
    Movies · EmmaCruzader
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  • Morty756483
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    The style oc writing is too poetish, you can remove 80% of adjectives from this chapter and the text will improve significantly. This should be a light novel not a poem from 18th century

    Ch 2 Chapter 0.2 - Prologue
    Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Morty756483
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    Great chapter, the only thing I would have changed - how quickly she accepted this dimensional shop, I would have believed to the last moment that it’s a part of the game or Akihiba’s plot

    Ch 25 Chapter 25
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine
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