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  • Morty756483
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    Good start

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: The Dilemma of Limits
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    Naruto: My Relationship Book
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  • Morty756483
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    Pill + Information

    1. Among all Paths listed without any connection to a Venerable (*Blade Path, Bone Path, Cloud Path, Dark Path, Emotion Path, Enchantment Path, Fire Path, Ice Path, Illusion Path, Information Path, Light Path, Lightning Path, Metal Path, Moon Path, Phantom Path, Pill Path, Restriction Path, Shadow Path, Snow Path, Sound Path, Sword Path, Water Path, Weapon Path, Wind Path*), which combination of two would you choose?
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Morty756483
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    I wish Red Sea Ancestor became a Venerable at his time, the guy is Gol D Rodger of Gu world.

    3. Who do you think, in the original story, are the closest people to becoming Venerable? (after fate was destroyed, and it became possible)
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Morty756483
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    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 24 **Chapter 24: Death Refinement**
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Morty756483
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    I don’t remember exactly, but does it really matter what thoughts he infused into Gu during its creation? I thought that if the Gu is called Poisonous Thought, it could be used for all kinds of purposes, poison your own thoughts, enslave someone, etc. Like a general purpose Gu, without the need to create a new one?

    Ch 23 **Chapter 23: Thought Poison**
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Morty756483
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    How did he get it? I thought he got the Healing Gu because he was 3rd?

    Liquor Worm Gu Rank 1
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Morty756483
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    Soul path actually sounds amazing, almost on par with Time path

    "The next to go is the Soul Path + Killing Path, just because it is too aggressive and has too few other use cases."
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  • Morty756483
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    It’s the path of the first strongest Venerable, right?

    *Qi Path*
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  • Morty756483
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    First chapter is very good, at least I feel it’s better then that one about Blood Venerable. It is just poison path sounds meh.. But it has been a while since I read the story, don’t remember much about it

    Ch 1 **Chapter 1: Reincarnation**
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  • Morty756483
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    [This cheat gives you the ability that you never have to feed your Gu, or to be more specific, any Gu that you keep in your Aperture does not have to be fed unless you want to.]
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  • Morty756483
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    Great chapter

    Ch 7 7: Loss and Gain
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    Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
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  • Morty756483
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    Good chapter, I suggest him to start thinking about production lines, bigger factory and effective time management, he lost several weeks manually building 5 robots

    Ch 43 Chapter 43 Troubles
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    Marvel: Tech System
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  • Morty756483
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    I don’t see any problems with sharing it

    NZT-48 was an option but I refrained from sharing that item. For now, it was my main trump card and was something I planned on keeping a secret for a long while.
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  • Morty756483
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    The dude hid his strength, but after killing Han he would be at 70% of Tobirama template. Who cares what Sarutobi says when he can steamroll everyone in Konoha with that power

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 Rejecting
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    Konoha: The Template System
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  • Morty756483
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    Thanks for the chapter, but it needs some serious editing. Also, for a person who did not watch RWBY this arc is very confusing, and I feel like you are skipping huge chanks of a plot. In the previous chapter MC helped this Phyrra and everything was fine, she was safe, this chapter starts with her already being half dead somewhere battling someone else.

    Ch 23 Chapter 23: Final Battle
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
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  • Morty756483
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    Again, she hired killers to off you and was loyal to Luthor, and you did not even fire her?

    "Have you seen her glare? I think if it were up to her, she would tear us apart on the spot. Mercy clearly doesn't like us very much. Maybe she and Lex had a relationship."
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  • Morty756483
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    Mercy was the one who arranged killers btw

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Dead
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  • Morty756483
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    Ring? What ring? Was it mentioned before?

    "How did you cheat? Did you pretend to faint and escape the magical test?" Damian turned his head toward a ring hanging around his neck.
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    Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary
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  • Morty756483
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    No one talks like that. ‘Eagerly waiting’?

    "Mark!" she exclaimed, rising from her seat. "You're here! I've been eagerly waiting to discuss your new project."
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    Hollywood: Head-Hunting System
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  • Morty756483
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    I usually don’t understand these dialogues in the chapters. Like in this case, what did she mean?

    "Hm... I guess that makes sense. Wait no, I couldn't relate." A strange glint flashed in Olga's eyes as Nicholas turned her way in horror, "The Ani-..."
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    Fate/Fisted
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