Comments of chapter undefined of The Adeptus Custodes(DC)

i would get rid or subjugate white martians to make Mars a forge world. Because Custodes are teach in every subject so he can also build ,create and forge his own space ships, battle tanks and more.

He should be fertile as dragons are. He can also sacrifice a body part like issei to be fertile

Brother Rather than Make him infertile just make him that he doesn't want kids now. because Warhammer has no place for childhood,

Wasn't she a white martian?

yo author, I have some suggestions if you will please don't make mc too strong too soon as it makes the story 10 times harder to make interesting as well as long lasting, just make him acceptable strong according to his wishes that not any John can make trouble for him but also not able to one shot superman as well as darkseid but making them bleed is more than acceptable other is to use his psychic abilities more as they are truly OP take riley from villain retirement, he just has telekinesis but he solos his whole verse it is just that strong not to mention he can cover his whole self with it making his defense OP dragons can change forms, so as he inherits their powers, he can change his size, but I guess he should be a giant even in human form, so around 6'6 - 6'8 will be appropriate for him thanks for listening to my rant. It's just so good that I don't want you to drop it so soon

White martians are gross looking even if they shapeshift thats not theyre true form just a transformation than agian dragon gitls true forms are lizards with wings

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

This chapter is steeped in heresy

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

¡gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

Thxs for the chap

Thanks

tbh the psychic bond thing kinda killed it for me. I hate harems and that psychic bond is the equivalent of Martian marriage. Add that Diana is also interested in him and him getting red flags.

Nothi my against this story but why wouod you stop a fanfic that you getting paid for to start a knew one that you’re posting for free?

Thanks for the chapter 📖😁👍

u author can u please post pictures for the mc and other characters? In the comments section 🙏

Wow, that was quick. I don’t know why he would form any kind of bond that quick but whatever.