That's stupid. You don't pay thieves.
Yeah they see it as a primitive worlds weapon. Personally I just think they gave up on developing them as much as we did once they got blasters. They also refer to them as slugthrowers not guns.
I think he means viper as in the snake but made a spelling error.
🤷♂️ kinda hard to tell if your being sarcastic over messages unless you greatly exaggerate it or use emojis.
I'm thinking its Cassandra Kain. The other batgirl besides Barbara Gordon.
What if that roulette ends up on something like a pyukumuku? Would you just not include a pokemon like that on the roulette or would you/MC reject it and just lose an opportunity to catch a new pokemon?
I would've avoided mentioning the playing card gun. Do you think he realized how ridiculous it sounds compared to everything else he mentioned?
The professor never learned the fastest way to a girls heart.
Another review suggested it's going to be or at least seems like it will be a harem. Since you've read the crude version can you give a solid yes/no to the 'is it a harem' question?
Do they even have pepperoni in that world?
HERESY! Thick crust is the only way to go!
So far so good. The only minor issue I really notice is a missing word here or there that makes the sentence flow better. 'Like Uchiha' should be 'Like the Uchiha'. Simple stuff like that. Non-native English speakers might not pay attention/notice it but to people like me whose primary language is English it sticks out.
Nah, that's nasty. She's a vampire so that counts as necrophilia. Hard pass.