This story is pretty good i would put it in the library but the update timeing is trash

For real this mc mentality is annoying u could die tom yet ur worrying about others not saying he has to be an unfeeling emo but priorities an mc that cant even put his life above a stranger isnt the type i enjoy reading may sound edgy but in reality someone who decides that thier life is worth less than a stranger should see a therapist since they dont value themselves at all sacrificeing yourself is only for friends and family

Mc seems like a wuss he could die at anytime yet hes worried about other people who he barely knows this combined with the idiocy of him not haveing the power of the person hes become is really dragging this story down auther could have just had him beocme yagura when hes a kid

Ive always disliked it when mc becomes someone powerful but doesnt get thier power its tedius hopefully he gets some strength quickly

I wonder if blood transfusion would work they would still keep bleeding but the blood could be replaced as fast as it leaves

Chinese naruto stories almost always have mc only care about ninjutsu as if taijustu and others dont matter its so dumb even if u master s rank ninjtsu if ur trash in other places and dont have combat experience youll be killed by a chunin

Its uneeded to show canon events if they arnt changed

How convenient that she could instantly accept and love akeno as her daughter but refuses to do the same with her husband auther is trying way to hard for her to be mcs woman

Didnt the auther say hes gonna focus on expanding on the harry potter world is that comeing later or was the idea scrapped so far things seem to drawn out in this story for my likeing considering how many chaps there are and were only at first year theres also the fact that mc said he plans to keep thing close to the original story for saftey if the auther really doesnt plan on expanding on world building this story will become boreing if the main events really do stay the same

Far to much telling instead of showing we should be reading these events as they happen not a summary of them ive seen many auther do this and i feel it really takes away from the story

Why tf would u want to add a dursly arc nobody likes them even more so without his memories hell just be an actual child being a abused u a safist or something?Also hope he doesnt forgive his parents.

He could have taken an interest later when shes grown instead hes actively grooming her and dont bother saying hes not everyone knows hinatas situation being friendly to her and helping her gain confidence when shes so young will have an obviuse result and the mc has memories from his past life so mentally hes not a child im not hating on it as u said it happens often in storys so its something readers have to endure doesnt change the fact that its annoying

Pedo mc grooming hinata

Few chapters ago it was stated uchiha respect strength above everything so much so that they shut up if the mc simply glares at them now fuguka who everyone knows has mangekyo is being disresected by an uchiha weaker than him some parts of this are good but its one of those storys where everything is just far to convienent and easy for the mc making it boring most of the time

I hate it when mcs are submissive and scared of woman more so thier lovers

I kept reading and spoiler mc is a superdevil at like 12 so he didnt need to use any of this stuff

The system interface and explanation on ablities is takeing over more than half the chapter

Why did he admire her so much if he knew about the kings piece?Her useing that takes away all her achievments in the rateing game.And as as i know beyond the rateing games she hasnt achieved anything.So really the only thing to admire about her are her looks even her bearing is due to her fake power and achievments.

The jug drive alone should have been enuf either its a nerf to the powers hes gotten or the auther doesnt understand power levels

Its Nice to see this happen ive always disliked them being rude to higher beings that grant them wishes with no repercussion