Comments of chapter undefined of Not the Last Airbender

Wow, I (mildly) criticized the writing format just a few hours ago and now a chapter has come out that is pure literary juice. I give my hand, the writer knows how to write a captivating chapter when he tries, even if it's just a little. I just recommend that you focus more on the quality of writing each chapter than on the frequency of releases. You know, quality over quantity. (But between you and me, everyone likes it when updates are frequent and chapters are a good length and content.) I know it might seem like an insult to some people, but I recommend you read an avatar fanfic. It's not to criticize or anything, but because the work is really very good, very original and very well written. "Focused Fire (ATLA)" is the name. Thanks for the chapter. It made my day better.