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It’s deserved🙂👍

That’s good then, I will wait for the next chapter.🙂

That’s fair, all I could say is to make sure you get enough sleep. Are you still going to be continuing this story down the line?

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Amazing review author, not only did you explain what it’s about for new readers but also self criticised, a good thing for any person to have. Well done.🙂

Been with this story since basically the start and can say with certainty that it only gets better as it goes on, from the world building to, what I think is its strongest point of character design. Writing quality The writing quality is incredibly well done with a conftable and smooth flow of reading, the grammar is near perfect with only very few mistakes. The emotional scenes feel emotional and the action scenes immerse you into the very fight itself. Overall the writing quality is near peak and well above average. Updating stability The stability of updates is consistent and regular, nearly everyday and even then it’s not for long before another chapter, or two, is posted. Story development The story development has a well paced story. Not to fast and not to slow, allowing you to easily follow the story while giving you enough of what you want before moving on to the next interesting section. This keeps the story fresh and as of chapter 72 I have yet to become bored. Character design This is what I think is its strongest point. The characters feel real with each having their own thoughts and personalities. And with the characters that it focuses on we get to see how each of them grows and improves. The side characters are a good mix with no one character the same. Overall the Author has done an amazing job. World backround The world building so far is very diverse with lots of different imaginative places that we can allow ourselves to immerse in, with a big range of different monsters and areas, so far not many communities or cities have been seen but that’s to be expected in the place the story is currently taking place in. The monsters however are all different with their own unique and interesting traits. One of its strongest points I believe are this novels monsters. Power system The power system, which is always something important for me. Seems to be well thought out, and versatile enough that the characters can grow along side their powers and build a fighting style that suits them. With each character gaining different and unique powers to help them specialise in different things. As of right now, there is no jack of all trades. Personally I quite like that, as it means that the Mc or other characters cannot just do everything by themselves and allows for more character interaction. The Author Finally the Author. This is another one of its strong points, as the Author is incredibly active and responds to the comments answering any questions readers may have while also taking responsibility for any spelling mistakes they have made. (Unlike a certain few.)

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Oh thank god, well I definitely understand the school part. for writers block remember those ideas that you were given in the previous chapters, have a look at those. and another way is to have a look at other books, shows and movies, even games work. You can use those as inspiration, changing the ideas or just using them as it's fine as not everything is original and with your own characters I'm sure it will twist a little anyway. Hope you come back soon.🙂

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Einar D. Damien "The God Of Ruin"

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It should have been: would he somehow be able to hear Spheris?*

I was reffering to the spelling.

Author?

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