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The mc is fine as he is, of course he should be a bit more vengeful to those that attack him. But a bad mc is what every Hollywood novel has. It is honestly refreshing to have an mc like this, I'm not saying that he should be a goody two shoes. Using a bad guy character template in Hollywood brings fatigue at this point since each and every Hollywood novel is like that.
I noticed the name of the title of the fanfiction. It made me realize that the mc is going to become a dog for others throughout the story, the story is centered around him being loyal to his master's no matter what. Morgan doesn't deserve anything at all. Even if it is a simulation, this is a bit too much to read. I will wait for when he finishes the simulation.
😂This guy... smh.
😂 bootlicker
It was indeed comedic at the beginining how he acts toward Freya. But making him a simp for too long is too much. There are many top tier women in Danmachi, why hang on to a woman who's whole familiar had a taste of? Author, let the mc interact with different girls. Freya is actually not that much of a problem, the problem is how the mc turn into her simp with no dignity.
Give him modern day Eminem's technical skills. He seems to focus more on being very technical and doesn't care if the song sounds good nowadays, and boy... he is out of this world with his skill. If only he focused more on making commercial music like in the past.
Dude, Playboy Carti is not a good rapper at all. Why would you tarnish the mc with his skills