The story has been good. But this insest stuff is getting weird and cringe. The romantic feelings for a family just makes it worst, and seeing chapters dedicated to this cringe is ruining the fic.

This fic has become very dumb

The airbender and not being a firebender, has thrown me for a loop. Hopefully he stays a grounded character with no more than one or two elements, and not a Gary stu. Ether way good chapters, looking forward to more.That Patr30n high tier sub is looking tempting for me.

I wonder if or when he will unlock his fire bending.

Look forward to getting info on where to find the Patreon. Definitely want to read those 15 plus chapters.

Amazing point of view and unique concept.

I enjoy where this story is going so far. Is there a patron or way to donate?

No content what so ever. Only enough content to fill one chapter. All chapters just asks for patreon and shows no content. This crap is lame.

Gay

Almost into chapter 20, and still narrating elementary school. This fic has failed too draw me in. Good setting with potential, but the story is too slow with the nothing happing.

Very disappointed to find out MC is female. Should have stated that in description.

Thank you for another amazing chapter

What happened to the chapters? What's with this weird reddit/twitter like articles about religions stuff? 🤷‍♂️

I was skeptical at first. A decent story worth reading. Plus kudos for the unique world setting. Was close to becoming cringe, but author has balanced it out a bit to the point it's a decent story. Nicely done on the multiple point of views, other writer fail at that but these or good.Hope to read more.

This made me binge read. A rare story where the character being Op is done right. Besides some grammar errors in early chapters a good fanfiction. I hope to see a time skip to cannon. I hop read more.

It was looking like it was going to be a good story until the church scene. The main character just turned into a murder hobo. Author has promise to do better in the future.

This fic is slow and boring. I skimmed until chapter six and still nothing is happening besides boring everyday living activities.

This would be a decent story, if the MC wasn't so cringe. The MC's personality is so cringe/borderline bipolar autistic. Something a 13 year old would make. Plus character personalities are two dimensional. On a personal preference, after the last chapter I read I hope this story ends.

Glad that he stopped that Jenkem ooga with a bat.