IHaveHidden
I need to ask will she be the romantic interest? Lilian has literally nothing interesting, is it for the drama? character development? And now the MC has already told Ashley that he's just like her if he suddenly stops chasing the useless redhead, how will Ashley react? he will lose her trust. Ashley has been the love interest from the beginning and this whole arc of disappointment is to make his connection with Ashley better??? I need more chapters
mc/severus must tell him what happened in the screaming shack. Lily: Sorry, Severus, I didn't want to betray you again, but I don't want anyone to get hurt. Severus: hahaha hurt you say, we already passed that line a long time ago, remember when Potter told everyone that he saved my life, but he said what about? Lily: No he didn't say it, you said he was a false hero. Severus: because it is, they tried to kill me by locking me up with a werewolf, but Dumbledore threatened me to keep silent otherwise he would expel me, but you know I don't care anymore, there you have the supposed hero, despite what happened they don't stop because they know that Dumbledore will always protect them because they are Gryffindors.
Technically you're so lucky, that even if the wizarding world found out about the potion, they wouldn't be able to do anything because every attempt against Snape would go against them, Example: they throw an atomic bomb at them "the bomb fails and falls on themselves" , They want to cast a spell on Snape in large groups to analyze his mind "their wands break, they bite their tongues and say the spell wrong and attack each other by mistake"
He should've at least obliviated her. And seriously all I see is a guy simping over a girl who doesn't properly return his feelings. Since he is a new person stitched from two souls then might as well start off anew, a fresh start so to speak. Seriously he's in the midst of a bloody cold war where his own situation is not guaranteed and he is still pining over a girl who might not feel as deeply as he does.