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It would be interesting if Aqua had acquired a fruit related to water to further enhance her power, or perhaps one related to souls or healing, While king al his body gradually adapt to the world of one piece, Be affected a little by the laws of the world and confused as one of the people in 1 million who are born with the emperor's haki, Making king apart from his terrifying aura and king motor, also have the king's haki, Making him release all 3 at the same time when he gets scared, making his enemies feel the pressure of 3 different things.
Doubt, the Protagonist will also become spiritually strong? Or will it just be Azula who gets stronger? I mean, the Protagonist could do something like every time Azula kills someone, he absorbs the spirits of the fallen or something similar to strengthen his own spirit.
The protagonist goes to the bathroom and relieves himself The system: congratulations, you have completed the secret mission: go to the bathroom, you have obtained 10% of the staff The protagonist: ...Really? They don't even hide it anymore, this is clearly for the benefit of the plot
The Protagonist can't even beat Saitama, No matter how strong saitama becomes, even when receiving garou's blows that could destroy planets, The guy was still without a scratch, What's more, in the fight against god, God, who was a being from the fifth dimension and could with one movement destroy all life in the universe as if it were nothing, could not do much against Saitama since he did not make him break a sweat either, So even if the protagonist at some point will have Saitama's strength, it would only be for a few seconds, since Saitama's strength would multiply seconds later.
Honestly, wanting to help evil morty, i don't think it's the smartest thing to do, The guy is manipulative and only looks out for himself, he doesn't care about killing other ricks or mortys, whether good or bad, So if the protagonist will help him, it is almost certain that in the end when he achieves his objective he will murder the protagonist to avoid a possible variant in his freedom,
An interesting mission would be to go to the world of "The shining" Or to the "doctor sleep" The world's mission could be to kill the guys who seek to absorb the energy of children by extracting it from their screams of suffering to achieve immortality, While he would also have the mission of defeating and taming the creatures inside the cursed hotel to follow him, The result is that if you manage to "tame" them, then when you leave the world, they become part of your mind as a protective barrier for psychics who want to see your secrets, By acting as guardians of your mind, if a psychic wants to see your mind, they must first pass over the creatures of the cursed hotel first.
It would be interesting for the protagonist to improve his power to a point where we say, That if he manages to negate any supernatural attack with his right hand, such as a spear of light, a minimum of 100 times, Then he assimilated his power within himself and obtained total immunity to spears of light, Making him no longer need to use his hands to block the light spears since his own body would reject them, In the same way, you can also do the same with the power of destruction, lightning, or any sacred gears, That at a point when he blocks those attacks, his power assimilates them and makes him completely immune to them, Resulting in his body rejecting them at the slightest contact without the need for his right hand,
I would say that to avoid being OP, You should have a restriction where you can only get one gift each year from the person whose fate you changed in the present or the past, So if the fate of, say, Tsunade and Hinata changes in the same year, Then you could only choose one of the two to receive a gift for changing your destiny, Having to wait another year if he wants to receive the reward for having changed the other character's destiny, That is, you can choose Tsunade's gift, but you would have to wait 1 more year to claim Hinata's gift Just an idea, but something like a gift claiming cooldown time restriction might be good to avoid being OP
What if you better get a gift every time a person's destiny changes? For example: when saving Izumi, Mikoto, or some other pacifist Uchiha from dying by Itachi, Then he would receive something like resistance to illusions, an improvement in his reflexes and better vision permanently, (Without obtaining the Sharingan as that would only raise unnecessary questions about whether his mother was unfaithful to his father with an Uchiha, Better to instead just give him better vision, reflexes, and resistance to illusions passively) Another example would be that if he cures Tsunade's blood fear disease, then he could gain perfect control of her chakra. Or if he manages to prevent Hizashi Hyuga from being sacrificed for "peace" Then the protagonist could obtain the ability to be a sensor ninja and be able to sense the chakra of others from more than 1km away. In short, obtain skills related to the people whose destiny changed,
It would be great if king, with his own aura and heartbeat, is the only human being completely immune to the emperor's haki, Since the king had always been in situations where he faced much more powerful monsters and their death auras, King would have gained complete immunity to his opponents' auras of power, terror, or haki, Since, let's say, Whitebeard arrives and activates his emperor's haki, King is not affected by it and faints, If not, his own aura, face, and heart beating at 1,000 per hour allow him to block any type of aura that tries to break his will, Obviously he would still be afraid of the pirates because of their strength, but it would be because of that, because of their strength, not because of their auras.
From this chapter it was already seen that the plot changed... Sasuke couldn't throw shuriken like that, especially before he was a genius, The one who could deflect the shurikens with others in the air to redirect the trajectory was Itachi, Here Sasuke seems to have been improved in strength, Another thing, if the protagonist did the same training that rock lee, then Sasuke without Sharingan would be unable to see him move, So, in this fanfic, either Sasuke was improved, the protagonist was nerfed, maybe both, or the end result is that the author forgot those canon details.
I remember reading something similar years ago. The protagonist was also the son of Odin, he left and started with the same thing, the power of the sun and the source of reincarnation, The joke is that in the end I think he recruited angels from Chinese games I think, He fought with Sun WuKong and I don't know how much, Is this story the same? Or is it just a coincidence and its own story?