Comments of chapter undefined of Journey Of Zoro In Another World
Journey Of Zoro In Another World
Fumiaki
Chapter comments26
I feel that you are dragging on unnecessarily, the interactions and dialogues between characters have to improve (there are times when I don't know who is speaking, it is a little confusing), the thoughts and internal reflections seem very good to me, I think you understood Toji very well, but I think that Zoro lacks a little maturity and seriousness that characterizes him, the fic is very good so far, I'm not saying that to bother, just an observation that can help, thank you and keep it up
Is this a new trope of a patreonize author? Dragging every interaction unnecessarily to pad content? I think it might be better to make the three chapter of Toji into one for coherence sake author.I know cliffhanger is sort of unavoidable, more so if your style of writing is to churn out lots of chapter daily. I just felt that outlining an arc, setting a goal of 3-5 chapter a week, and makes a chapter that consist of 3.5k-5k words much better in terms of quality of a story. And with these schedule there's a leeway to do something else.
