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Zbara_15771dCommentedCh 20 Evolution- Zbara_15772dCommented
Good story Author sama, if was fun while it lasted. Until next time. adios amigo. Later alligator. Two birds one stone.
I was constantly writing since 10th of April and just need a short break to relax a bit, the story will not be dropped, don't worry. - Zbara_15772dReplied to Vidhan_Bhardwaj
nah you gotta reupload the whole thing, say what you changed so people come back
No readers are there - Zbara_15773dCommentedCh 20 Training Results Summary, Assuming the Role of the Prophet?
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Nah, honestly, Even after reading this fic from the start, I've never expected the weight of his balls to surpass the sun. Finally someone with the guts to do this in a Naruto fic
Fujin nodded and answered in the same casual tone while raising his fourth finger, "Sure, your fourth option is to lie to me and ally with Iwagakure after we leave. In that case, I'll return later and assassinate every one of you and kill every single person living in your houses." - Zbara_15775dCommentedSuddenly, his eyes widened. Hanging around Fujin and falling prey to his sudden attacks without caring whether he was ready or not had an effect on Naruto. He didn't bother waiting for Zabuza to be done with his speech. At the same time, Naruto and each of his Shadow Clones launched several kunai. Each of the kunai had an explosive tag attached to them!
- Zbara_15775dCommented[A/N: Ashikaga Hiroshi was first shown in chapter 169.]
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I feel like mc *has* to get a tyranitar at some point if big battles go like this.
Even though the attacks were defended, no one relaxed as they heard Eliza's voice once again, 'Use Rock Blast, Stone Edge, Power Gem, Ancient Power, Earth Power or other similar mid-range moves. This shall be our last attack before the Tide reaches us and we enter into a melee.' - Zbara_15777dCommented
Dragon dance
Gyarados and I feasted on the sea king and partied until it got dark. I played my guitar and jammed out playing songs I knew Gyarados danced to the tunes. - Zbara_15778dCommented
lol, this is how it's supposed to be, not a 'certain' fic where reincarnated goes insane because he lost an academy fight.
Yuta don't really mind losing the fight or enduring some pain because of it. What he don't like about those fights is that he don't learn anything from it. - Zbara_15778dCommented
well, for low level stuff like explsion tags, regular programing logic applies, or things that don't need encryption
'Well, fuinjutsu art is no joke from what it seems. It's works in a way just like the normal programming, but in this world it's important to make the seals in a complex and intricate way, instead of normal programming where the most important thing is that the program is written in the clear and understandable way, so other programmers will easily understand it in a glance.' - Zbara_15778dCommented
why doesn't he create a drunken/illusion fusion fist taijutsu
'Hm… If I remember correctly, the clone jutsu, that is the one of the three basic jutsus taught at the academy, is actually the basic genjutsu. Now I really want them to teach us the 3 basic jutsu as soon as possible!' - Zbara_15778dCommentedCh 2 Chapter 1 - Immutable
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I Guess I just don't see a strong reason for them being together, or I just don't remember (which also says something), in the sense that it's basic stuff like She/he's hot so they got together, and I care about you, so they dtay together. Quite shallow, but that doesn't mean it's bad. I guess I'll only find a problem with it if romance becomes an important part of the novel
Do comment on how you found it. Romance is the one area of writing in which I doubt myself near constantly. So your valuable opinions, and helpful critique will go a long way in helping me shore up my skills. - Zbara_15779dCommented
It's good. __ 6,7/10, but if you compare to webbovel, __8.1/10
Do comment on how you found it. Romance is the one area of writing in which I doubt myself near constantly. So your valuable opinions, and helpful critique will go a long way in helping me shore up my skills. - Zbara_15779dCommentedCh 1 CH 001
- Zbara_157710dCommentedRaiden looked at her impassively. He didn't know her story, there were many characters in this world that were never mentioned in the manga. He didn't know what pushed her to train.
- Zbara_157711dCommentedI poke her face, too. "Man, this is fun...right, need to get Tsumiki out. Now, then, [Cursed Technique Reversal: Soul Suck]."
- Zbara_157712dCommentedCh 18 Chapter 11.5: Black Flag