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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Tech System

Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv14Love_C_raft

I don know about the plot anymore, you are giving yourself so much room that you can't extend to all of the space within, and it feels like it is going too fast, with many different subplots.

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Jdotbenzo_
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The nzt - 48 should never be giving out to anyone else even his friends , it’s literally his ace in the hole ….. have you not seen limitless? Once someone takes it people would want more and guess who the “creator” is … that’s basically creating enemies for oneself plus the government would want that drug under their control ….any ways it’s just a suggestion and it’s your fanfic [tftc💯]

noblej_7BPH
noblej_7BPHLv4noblej_7BPH

sounds like MC needs to make his own tailored spider serum . 😂.

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

Was Peter's serum a mixture of crm 24 and serum from other spiders? That's why he optimized DNA without leaving harmful mutations? The mc has to use this knowledge to make simpler products, such as more efficient food supplements, weight control products, skin quality products, elimination of diabetes and minor illnesses related to lifestyle habits, this in addition to money will serve as disguise to optimize your acquaintances more deeply, like it can make those who use all these things able to correct small defects and change their appearance, become healthier, younger and more beautiful. Therefore, even if people close to them receive crm 24, no one will notice, because even ordinary people could reach apce or elderly people and have a younger appearance and better health due to the various products in these simpler areas of supplements and cosmetics.

JacksonDAnderson
JacksonDAndersonLv1JacksonDAnderson

Capsule corp tech!!! -hoi poi capsule -gravite chamber -watch miniaturise -watch to transform hero suit -radar white a map of all world whith search app -tecnology of comunication and capacity to call to namek an the eart in time real -machine time!!! -Clones machine - And Android(waifus)buiding!!

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

One detail, food supplements and cosmetics have simpler regulations than medicines.

darkkelbek
darkkelbekLv4darkkelbek

Folding tech, compress tech, and weight tech are important which has a similar effect like shinkring tech but more easy to get and use.

Law_of_Self_doubt
Law_of_Self_doubtLv4Law_of_Self_doubt

Come on Rick Sanchez is a human put his knowledge in he is one if not the most versatile and op scientist in my opinion add rick and morty world to the system please and I love your story

Swikong
SwikongLv4Swikong

Include this to MC's goal: To make the planet one nation.

Iceling
IcelingLv14Iceling

Considering spiderman's potential ,he should have got a lot more points. 👀

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

When the MC is a supplier to the police, army and then international, he will have the power and influence to do more things.

Anuj_Shankar_Rai
Anuj_Shankar_RaiLv1Anuj_Shankar_Rai

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LittleRedsWolf
LittleRedsWolfLv5LittleRedsWolf

TFTC!

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GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Every reader: A normal person would work to get those power first, at least. Author: No no, this is how normal people ar. Reader: This is more than my suspense of belief can take, have you ever talked to people?

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Damian_Breen
Damian_BreenLv2Damian_Breen

interesting premise, hopefully the changes to Parker aren't so extreme. like make is "stuff" radioactive. also, where is the next chapter!?!? I needs moar.

Darren_Laban_9044
Darren_Laban_9044Lv1Darren_Laban_9044

why would he need a spider serum when hes about to go full spartan super solder

Yean_Delgado
Yean_DelgadoLv1Yean_Delgado

Más capitulos por favor. Gracias por el capitulo, sigo esperando por más.

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stads
stadsLv12stads

nice chapter thx for writing it

dumpster40
dumpster40Lv4dumpster40

Phineas and Ferb has some cool tech

OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Great chapter