a surprisingly good read if you can keep it at this level you will have a lot of fans

more gimme moreee i need my fix

thay are still growing and learning so they may be weak now but just wait

i loved the savage land ark he finally got a chance to let rip and show what he can really do it was great and he never really left civilisation with his link to Skynet sky net for president would be so much better than Biden

loving the story

another fan fic bites the dust

interesting start pitted against the whole of shield. hydra he has meta knowledge so hes better off than the original as he knows a few he can trust now could be an awesome story if done right

i think your forgetting how op rick really is he makes tony stark look like a retard

glad you changed your mind and didn't drop this story how often will you be posting chapters?

wouldn't that make him way to op plus the price for that would be in the millions of points

why would he need a spider serum when hes about to go full spartan super solder

loving the story so far ..the beauty of this story is if he gets writers block he can just copy any of the hundreds of scp story's out there its genius

Warhammer meets hp pure genius write faster this junky needs his fix

sorry you've taken a great idea and made it really cringeworthy

other than that loving the story very well written just not a fan of the breaks

my only crit is that the author thinks we are all retards and he must explain everything hence the massive brakes in the story to make sure we understand whats going on

story got better well done i loved it

It's a shame this story was dropped just as it was ramping up

other than the annoying habit of calling male character's her instead of he this is not a bad story ide rate it mid range not the best but i have read way worse .... on the whole not a bad little tale to maybe keep you entertained